She stared into the water as colors sharpened and figures became distinct. It was a face, reflected by the light of the moon. Pale as the moon itself, she gasped. ( Snow. )
Thank you ^^ I'm not sure if it'd suit as a prologue, but I found no other words to describe it or call it by o.o? But I don't think it is? Well, it's an intro of some sort, but then again, it's ... not? Hehe. Not sure.
I realized I made a lot of mistakes - I was comparing how I wrote it in my actual writing journal to how I typed it, then I realized some of the sentences don't even make sense! Haha.
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I realized I made a lot of mistakes - I was comparing how I wrote it in my actual writing journal to how I typed it, then I realized some of the sentences don't even make sense! Haha.
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