Fic: "Anyone Can Tell" | NC-17 | Merlin/Arthur

[shes_gone]

Title: Anyone Can Tell (you think you know me well)
Author: shes_gone
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,500
Summary: This kinkme_merlin prompt: Arthur and Merlin have a casual sex-only relationship per Arthur’s request. But, once Merlin breaks it off to pursue something more meaningful, Arthur realizes that he has fallen in love with Merlin. So my

Comments

[tmelange]

This is very well done with perfect characterizations. Bravo!

[shes_gone]

Thank you so much!

[kerryblaze]

I was tracking this prompt and so pleasantly surprised to see your name show up in my inbox! ♥

I really loved this. Arthur was so in character. I loved that it was mushy without if being actually mushy!

[shes_gone]

Heee! So stealthy. ♥

Thank you! I kind of love these boys a LOT right now.

[shiny4love]

Christ Arthur can be a blind fool. This was wonderful I'm so glad he caught on.

A perfect fill thank-you :)

[shes_gone]

Hahaha, yeah, he's a bit dense. ;)

Thank you!

[ermynee224]

Wow. I can't even deal with how beautiful your writing is. Thank you so much for writing this. Arthur is utterly clueless but endearing - one of the ways I like him best ♥

Merlin grins, and suddenly Arthur's warm all over-physically warm, like the sun's just come out, or has started issuing its warmth directly from Merlin's beaming face. For a brief, unbalanced moment, Arthur almost thinks he can see it: a small flash of golden sunlight in Merlin's eyes that soaks right into his skin, leaving him breathless and awed and confused-but then Merlin's on top of him, back in the bed with his arms wrapped around his neck, kissing him and grinning so hard he might burst, and Arthur can do nothing but grin and kiss him right back.
*___* A perfect ending.

[shes_gone]

♥! Thank you so much!!

[kittie8571]

this was lovely and sweet and I will definitely be rereading this in my immediate future =)

[shes_gone]

aw, thank you!