"Don't Make Me..."

[sherylyn]

Title: Don’t Make Me…
Characters/Pairings: Peter/El/Neal
Rating: Teens
Summary: She was going to kill them.
Notes: For RuntheCon Round Five on LJ, with the prompt, “Don’t make me tell you twice,” from pooh_collector.
I tag kanarek13 with the prompt: “The sun’ll come out tomorrow…” (I couldn’t help it; I’ve been listening to a lot of musicals’ soundtracks, and it’s been raining

Comments

[dennih23]

I love this. Love how both guys are more worried about what El is going to do to them than their injuries. She is in charge and they know it. LOL at El realizing she was sounding like her mother.

Great story.

[sherylyn]

Hee! So glad you enjoyed it! I kind of thought they'd figure out pretty quickly who's really in charge of most things; they're both smart, you know ;-)

[tjs_whatnot]

D'awww!

Super adorbs!

♥

[sherylyn]

Hee! Thanks bunches!!!

[fireheart13]

Hahaha that was delightful!!

[sherylyn]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[cookielaura]

Oh this is lovely, they are the cutest :D Love how Neal is a bit unsure at first as to how to act, bless him <3 And the two of them tucked up in bed having dinner is the sweetest image!

[sherylyn]

Thank you so much! I had fun, once I got going with it :-D

[hurinhouse]

I love it when El lays down the law - great woman!

Love Peter teaching Neal how to deal with her and how quickly Neal smooths into the flow of it.

[sherylyn]

Hee! I just couldn't help but think that, with having both of them in her life, El would sort of have to come up with some way of keeping them both somewhat in line! LOL!!

Neal might've caught on a bit quicker if he were at his best, but in this case, he'll take all the help he can get. Peter may not always "get" things the way Neal and El do so easily, but he at least has years more experience in dealing with her! LOL!!