Fic: Memories Remain (SGA, Lorne/Ronon, PG)

Jul 25, 2010 02:53

Title: Memories Remain
Author: sheryden
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1609
Pairing: Ronon/Lorne, pre-slash
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Alas, not mine.
Summary: After Lorne loses a team member, Ronon reaches out to him.
Notes: This was written for hc_bingo for the prompt "grief" and it answers the Lorne Fest prompt, “writing those letters home ( Read more... )

ronon dex, fic: stargate: atlantis, bingo, lorne and his dimples

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vexed_wench July 25 2010, 07:08:55 UTC
Poor Evan. I am glad that Ronon was able to help. I love that Ronon was the one that was able to give him such wise words.

One small thing
Evan wasn’t sure what he needed tonight-conversation of silence. should be Or not of , right?

Anyways great job!

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sheryden July 25 2010, 07:10:26 UTC
Thank you!

Yep, it should be or. I've been staring at this for too long!

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vexed_wench July 25 2010, 07:13:38 UTC
I know how that feels. Nice to see the Lorne centric fic. :)

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theeverdream July 25 2010, 07:21:06 UTC
*sniffle* That was a lovely moment between the two of them... I liked what Ronon said about Lorne caring. And I like the realism of how what Ronon said didn't automatically make it better for Lorne, because it really wouldn't. But the end of the fic does give hope - Lorne is smiling, and that's a good thing. <3

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sheryden July 25 2010, 07:23:23 UTC
I am relieved the end works, because I've been fighting with the end of this fic for days. Now I want to write a happy fic! :D How is your fic going?

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theeverdream July 25 2010, 07:35:17 UTC
Happy Lorne/Ronon porn? *smiles innocently*

My fic is going okay, thanks! About as well as expected, meaning quite slowly due to tiredness and then I keep adding things to my to-do list, hahaha :) But the awesome thing is that I am happy and excited about it all instead of stressing over deadlines... that's the biggest thing for me right now! :D

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sheryden July 25 2010, 07:44:02 UTC
Thanks! :D I'm a sucker for this pairing. I've always thought Ronon's hard edge really disguises a soft and caring person underneath.

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sexycazzy July 25 2010, 10:46:35 UTC
This is really lovely. Emotional for Lorne and is glad that Ronon was there to help him.

Loved it.

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sheryden July 25 2010, 16:53:17 UTC
Thank you! :D

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sheryden July 25 2010, 16:52:58 UTC
Thanks! :D

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