Comments | sheryden: Fic: Vulnerability, Chapter 2

sheryden

Fic: Vulnerability, Chapter 2

Sep 18, 2007 23:36

Title: Vulnerability
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Pairing: Sam/Daniel
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: General for Season 10, but nothing specific
Genre: A little bit of everything, but mostly H/C and Angst
Summary: Lonely and in pain, Sam and Daniel cross a line in their relationship.
Author's Notes: This story has been swirling around in my head for a while. ( Read more... )

fic: stargate: sg-1, ship: sam/daniel

Comments 9

charityanne September 20 2007, 01:39:29 UTC

Angie, this is wonderful. It was so nice to have something to look forward to after coming home from my "night with the girls." I absolutely love the changes you made, especially concerning Sam and Daniel's discussion about Morlan. Also, the bits of interior monologue on Daniel's part (i.e before arriving at Sam's house), are excellent "finishers." One thing I love best about this piece is your impeccable sense of timing/pace. The story's cadence just feels so right. And...I don't think you could have ended better. I love how the moment is sweet/tender but leaves us hanging slightly.

I have more to say, but this is getting quite long!

When will chapter 3 be available? =)

sheryden September 20 2007, 18:13:48 UTC

Thanks. I was happy with it when I wrote it, but no one seems to be reading it. A bit disheartening.

Anyway, I was happy with the ending, too. It felt right to end it on a tender but slightly undefined moment. I'll pick up with Sam's POV.

I was initially going to tell the Daniel/Cam conversation from Cam's POV, but I thought it was too early to give insight into why Cam is concerned about Daniel. As it turned out, the scene gave me a chance to get inside Daniel's head, which was important.

I'll get Chapter 3 up as soon as I can. It might be a week.

I am! alessiana October 7 2007, 07:29:06 UTC

I'm reading it. I just found it today. Please keep writing. Please. It must be discouraging. I'll let people on the s/d lists in yahoo know you are writing.

I don't like WIPs but I will read them.

Thank you and I hope you know now you have another reader and more to come.

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Re: I am! sheryden October 9 2007, 23:26:17 UTC

Thanks! :D

Awesome Story anonymous October 7 2007, 17:12:09 UTC

Just had to say this is a great story! I can't wait to see where you take it next!

Re: Awesome Story sheryden October 12 2007, 12:58:19 UTC

Thanks!

silver_galaxy October 12 2007, 10:51:37 UTC

The way you've portrayed Sam and Daniel's friendship when Daniel came to Sams house with pizza and beer was great. You've also done a good job showing Cam's concern for his team, even if it isn't always welcome :) Can't wait to read more :)

sheryden October 12 2007, 12:59:14 UTC

Thanks! I should have the next couple of chapters up soon. :)

Icon love.

pygmymuse October 25 2007, 04:20:34 UTC

After I finished chapter one, I just had to read the next part. I really liked the twist you took with this part... I wasn't expecting the bit about killing a former friend who'd turned on him (thought it was a teammate that got injured or something), so that was nice, being surprised. :) And the friendship between Daniel and Sam, very good, and the more than friendship, even better. :)