Oh my Heavens Sherry! If any piece of writing could reach inside someone and wrench the heart right out of a chest, this one does. Oh my, I just can't find any more words. But my heart is not in my chest anymore. What a fabulous piece.
This is a good piece. However, it would be easier to read if you had a blank line between each paragraph. Without it the words tend to run together and be harder to follow.
Thank you so much for reminding me about the blank lines! I meant to do that, but I was so exhausted after writing it all day I forgot. and when I read it back with my screen reader, it doesn't read blank lines, so I completely forgot. If anyone who's commented on the need for blank lines could look it over and tell me if it's better now, that would be awesome. I don't have to repost the link or anything do I? Thank you again so much. This was, well, no coffee yet, so can't think of the word, important, special, anyway, a meaningful piece to me, and I don't want people to be turned off from the content because of the format. Hugs for pointing out the problem to me! Really.
Are you writing your posts in another program then pasting them in here? I get this problem sometimes if I don't double check, at times the formatting just gets weird.
Wow, girl, this is really powerful stuff. I am really sorry you went through this. I know people can be this awful and cruel but hearing of it just makes me sad for people like you who went through it and live with it the rest of your life.
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Are you writing your posts in another program then pasting them in here? I get this problem sometimes if I don't double check, at times the formatting just gets weird.
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Really excellent entry.
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