afraid of standing still [1/4]

[sherlockelly]

Title: afraid of standing still
Author: sherlockelly
Pairing: Dany Heatley/OMC
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Real people, fake story.
Word Count: 25,795

Summary: Dany Heatley continues to drift violently away from the idea of the man he had wanted to be.

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Comments

[revuko]

Fuck. Yes.

[sherlockelly]

I slayed the fanfiction dragon with this one.

Icon always relevant.

[belial]

Jesus. I'm off to read the next parts, but here are my thoughts thus far:

1) I love Dan and Dany. They're the perfect best friends. Dan not caring that Dany's gay. Dan being the best kind of mind-reading brother in the world to Dany's insecurities.
2) Michael is adorable. I love that he sees straight though Dany's bullshit. I love that they become exclusive.
3) When Jake hugs Dany after finding the pornos, I about cried.

This is so beautiful. More comments to follow, I'm sure.

[sherlockelly]

1) Dan and Dany are such an oddball pair, they're both too perfect for the other.

2) I'm glad that Michael worked for you! I was so afraid that he had no depth whatsoever, I mean, hell, he doesn't even get a last name! He was my biggest nailbiter this whole time since I've never take on a oc before.

thank you!

[kaatiya]

This is simply fabulous. Well done!!

[sherlockelly]

Thank you so much! I lost so much sleep over this story that it was starting to feel totally not even worth finishing it, but I'm glad that I did.

Thank you for reading! I know it's long and heavy so I appreciate it all the more.