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Break His Fingers, He Won't Play the Piano No More (8/?) tawabids May 29 2011, 22:19:31 UTC
“What do you want?” John says. He sounds like an old dog that has been beaten too many times to bite any longer. He makes his way toward the main street and Mycroft keeps the umbrella perfectly centred over a point halfway between their heads ( ... )

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Re: Break His Fingers, He Won't Play the Piano No More (11/11) jupiter_ash June 20 2011, 18:02:19 UTC
That was stunning. Had me hooked right from the start. A very well built story. Enjoyed it a lot, thanks. :)

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Re: Break His Fingers, He Won't Play the Piano No More (11/11) morganstuart June 21 2011, 10:48:40 UTC
This is seriously brilliant. Well done indeed. *standing ovation*

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Re: Break His Fingers, He Won't Play the Piano No More (11/11) mamishka June 28 2011, 05:30:56 UTC
Personally, if I were John, I would still be planning on how to kill/hurt/maim Mycroft just as much as humanly possible. The only reason he can't be on the front lines is because of Mycroft, after all.

This is very intense and gripping, but I can't say that I don't hope for John to make Mycroft love him beyond life itself and then abandon him utterly and completely or somehow otherwise destroy him. But then I'm a bitch who holds grudges for FAR less than what My put John through. Grrrrrr-rrrr! ;)

Still reading though, so congrats! ;)

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