Warning: triggers and dark!Sherlock
anonymous
February 20 2011, 07:42:38 UTC
John finally works up the courage to leave Sherlock. He waits until Sherlock falls asleep, then slips out of their bed and walks out into the night.
John knows Sherlock will be furious. He knows that Sherlock will hunt him down ruthlessly, and if - no, when - Sherlock found him, he will take out his displeasure on John's hide.
MiniFill, but this prompt deserves so much more!
anonymous
February 23 2011, 17:50:41 UTC
See title!
John can't stop trembling.
It's cold outside, and all he has on is a pair of jeans and one of Sherlock's button-ups. Bare feet, no shoes, no time for shoes, this is the first chance he's had, and he took it, he had to take it, he hates himself for taking it, but he couldn't stay, he couldn't.
Dear John, and he can't see him, can barely hear him, but the vibrations from the deep voice roll through him, Dear John, he says, trailing fingers over his face like he's something precious.
His legs can barely support him, but he keeps stumbling, dragging his shoulder along brick, and it's hard, he hasn't been on his feet for a week, an entire week, seven days tied down, no matter how he asked begged demanded pleaded.
It is necessary, you see, and John flinches at the baritone, the first noise in hours, but towards it or away he can't recall. You say you won't leave, John, but people lie, John, people lie all the time, and it's not that I don't believe trust love you, John, I just don't trust humanity.John is panting; short
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Re: MiniFill, but this prompt deserves so much more!
anonymous
February 24 2011, 19:05:08 UTC
The scenario you've set up is so creepy and startling, with Sherlock's words alternating with John's POV to capture John's terror, along with the horrifying realization that Lestrade is not who he seems. But it sets my mind whirling, wondering: How did we get here? Were there warning signs or did John just wake up one day tied to the bed? And what about Lestrade, especially the "Think he'll let me have a go at you for bringing you back?" comment? Has Sherlock does this before to other people and Lestrade's covered it up, maybe in exchange for some "favours?"
In short, I loved it and if you ever wrote more, I'd gobble it up.
Re: MiniFill, but this prompt deserves so much more!
anonymous
February 26 2011, 21:00:47 UTC
Bonus fucking first-born, internets and cookies for dark!Lestrade - god damn that was unexpected and hot like burning! (Why the hell hasn't there been more dark!Lestrade?!?!?)
John knows Sherlock will be furious. He knows that Sherlock will hunt him down ruthlessly, and if - no, when - Sherlock found him, he will take out his displeasure on John's hide.
But John has to try.
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John can't stop trembling.
It's cold outside, and all he has on is a pair of jeans and one of Sherlock's button-ups. Bare feet, no shoes, no time for shoes, this is the first chance he's had, and he took it, he had to take it, he hates himself for taking it, but he couldn't stay, he couldn't.
Dear John, and he can't see him, can barely hear him, but the vibrations from the deep voice roll through him, Dear John, he says, trailing fingers over his face like he's something precious.
His legs can barely support him, but he keeps stumbling, dragging his shoulder along brick, and it's hard, he hasn't been on his feet for a week, an entire week, seven days tied down, no matter how he asked begged demanded pleaded.
It is necessary, you see, and John flinches at the baritone, the first noise in hours, but towards it or away he can't recall. You say you won't leave, John, but people lie, John, people lie all the time, and it's not that I don't believe trust love you, John, I just don't trust humanity.John is panting; short ( ... )
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Jesus, this should not excite me as much as it does, and dark!Lestrade is also my new kink. More, please please please!
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Oh my god. That was perfection. How is dark!Lestrade that hot?
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In short, I loved it and if you ever wrote more, I'd gobble it up.
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That was amazing. More please?
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My teacher keeps giving me these looks that apparently mean that I'm biting my lip a bit too hard. ><
You are perfect and lovely and...and all great things. I love this. <3
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