Re: Coming out, fill 2/2
anonymous
August 27 2010, 15:47:13 UTC
His father, on the other hand, had an eyebrow raised, noticing their intertwined hands. John gritted his teeth together. He was pretty sure that he wasn't that nervous when he had actual bombs strapped to his chest. “Mom, what I'm trying to say is that... uhm...” John, you were our only hope! John how can you be gay you were so lovely with your High School sweetheart John, what about our grandchildren! You promised us! “Yes, John? - Well, actually, we... hm...” Are you going to adopt then? With this crazy man?!“John and I are in a relationship
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Re: Coming out, fill 2/2
anonymous
August 28 2010, 08:55:00 UTC
Ow sorry, anon!author here! well I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, I was quite worried! Thank you! to be truthful english is not my first language so i'm really crappy at knowing what's england's english or american :/ I know I should refrain from writing Sherlock since the distinction is important here, but uh, yeah, the show took over my mind!
Re: Coming out, fill 2/2sezsoSeptember 8 2010, 07:23:09 UTC
Hopefully you're still checking this, author!anon! :)
Well, I'm an American, so I can't Britpick, obviously, but I thought the English was just fine considering that it's not your first language! (I can't even Britpick let alone write in another language! lol) Don't refrain from writing, just tell people in the beginning that it's not your first language, the Sherlock fandom seems to be mostly full of awesome people! :)
The story is really cute, author!anon. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Re: Coming out, fill 2/2
anonymous
September 23 2010, 20:07:28 UTC
Oh, that is SO VERY AWKWARD, and it ends BEAUTIFULLY.
Sherlock's inability to do the appropriate thing actually HELPS A LOT at the end - clearly John is not doing this on a dare from Sally. And this guy is pretty odd, but, well, he does appear to love John.
I hope John and his parents get over it. It looks like Sherlock doesn't need to.
Captcha says: over ectors But I don't think anyone's overecting here!
John gritted his teeth together. He was pretty sure that he wasn't that nervous when he had actual bombs strapped to his chest.
“Mom, what I'm trying to say is that... uhm...”
John, you were our only hope!
John how can you be gay you were so lovely with your High School sweetheart
John, what about our grandchildren! You promised us!
“Yes, John?
- Well, actually, we... hm...”
Are you going to adopt then? With this crazy man?!“John and I are in a relationship ( ... )
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Well, I'm an American, so I can't Britpick, obviously, but I thought the English was just fine considering that it's not your first language! (I can't even Britpick let alone write in another language! lol) Don't refrain from writing, just tell people in the beginning that it's not your first language, the Sherlock fandom seems to be mostly full of awesome people! :)
The story is really cute, author!anon. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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I am British and one little pointer, we say "mum" not "mom". It's more glaring than most. :)
Otherwise, I'm glad you filled this!
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Sherlock's inability to do the appropriate thing actually HELPS A LOT at the end - clearly John is not doing this on a dare from Sally. And this guy is pretty odd, but, well, he does appear to love John.
I hope John and his parents get over it. It looks like Sherlock doesn't need to.
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But I don't think anyone's overecting here!
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