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Overflow Post II

Feb 10, 2013 18:51

This post is for responding to prompts from prompt posts that are full, or continuing WIPs that were started on prompt posts that have since filled up or are close to full.

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Bound (Warning: non-con) anonymous February 18 2013, 02:02:01 UTC

This is a fill for http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/2727.html?thread=5996711#t5996711 back in part 3. The original prompt reads:

"Sherlock and John are captured and tied up to each other on a bed, both completely naked (I'm sure there's been a prompt done along these lines before, but hold on). Moriarty comes in and says he's going to rape one of them. Both of them expect it to be Sherlock.

So of course, he rapes John instead.

Basically I'd like to see John attempting to face it calmly, trying not to break down, and Sherlock just totally freaking out. Trying to dissuade Moriarty, offering himself as better alternative and than - when it doesn't work - trying to help John through it as best he can when he's literally tied to John."

I would describe this fill as hurt/comfort, but it may be read as leaning more toward hurt.

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 1/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:03:12 UTC

He wakes to warmth, to a familiar scent. The press of bare flesh is familiar, the shape of it less so. He shifts, pulls his nose out of the crook of Sherlock’s neck - not that familiar then - and assesses the situation. His mouth feels fuzzy and his memories are patchy. They’d been attacked and then injected with something. He has some vague memories of transport, he’s probably been in a car, but he has no idea where they are or how long they’ve been indisposed. It doesn’t matter, he can leave those details to Sherlock ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 2/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:04:22 UTC

A change in breathing is the only warning he gets before Sherlock twists under him, shoving him away and telling him to “Get off ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 3/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:05:43 UTC

And then John hears a door open.

“Starting without me?” The voice is chillingly familiar and, John can admit to himself, not entirely unexpected. “I’m hurt“You,” Sherlock’s voice vibrates through him ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 4/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:07:02 UTC

“Tonight, I’m going to teach you a very special lesson about friendship,” he sounds like a character on children’s programming until he adds, “and the dangers thereof ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 5/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:07:55 UTC

“We are so alike, you and I.” Moriarty’s fingers find their way to John’s hairline as he speaks down at Sherlock, “Two sides to the same coin,” he massages John’s scalp, “I really will have to kill you some time. I can’t stand to let you live. But that’s the point, isn’t it?” He twists his fingers, pulling John’s head back. “You’ve found someone who can stand you, and isn’t that just fascinating ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 6/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:09:12 UTC

“Please, please fuck me,” and either his desperation is growing, or Sherlock’s gotten better at hiding his insincerity. “I don’t want it but I can’t stop you. You can thrust inside me as I writhe to get away. You can make me scream, and make me cry. You can make me,” the breaking of his voice has to be faked, it’s done so artfully, carrying so much horror, “feel you come.”

“I know I can darling, I know,” Moriarty sighs, “and here I thought I would have to teach you manners ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 7/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:10:12 UTC

Then he’s being touched again, and he can’t look at any part of Sherlock ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 8/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:11:05 UTC

It does not hurt as much as being shot ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 9/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:12:07 UTC

He tries to move as much of his weight to his arms as possible, to push himself up. But Moriarty, strokes slower now, presses a heavy arm across the back of his shoulders ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 10/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:13:02 UTC

He’s been actively ignoring that area. Their bodies are crushed together, so obviously there’s contact, but it’s nothing that he’s needed to focus on ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 11/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:14:04 UTC

Moriarty pushes himself further up John’s back ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 12/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 02:16:13 UTC

“The knife,” Sherlock demands as Moriarty straightens his jacket ( ... )

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 12/12 shadowfireflame February 18 2013, 03:31:56 UTC

Oh my God, that was sick and disturbing and so well done, with such a great take on John's perspective--how he feels slightly betrayed when Sherlock inadvertently gets a bit hard and how he feels better when Sherlock has real tears in his eyes. John's amazingly tough. Really believable characterizations all around. I really hope they are able to get through this intact, even though it will be hard.

Re: Bound (Warning: non-con) 12/12 anonymous February 18 2013, 17:03:19 UTC

Thank you very, very much. ♥ I like to believe they’d be able to work it out too; I think they’d have the perseverance.

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