Prompting Part XXIV

Jan 16, 2012 09:01

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anonymous January 16 2012, 19:14:49 UTC
After Sherlock's funeral, John goes to the pub - not to drink, just to be somewhere besides Baker Street.

Several people follow him there: Greg Lestrade, Henry Knight, Helen Stoner (from The Speckled Blonde), Mrs. Hudson, maybe the kids from the Geek Interpreter. Basically a bunch of people who still believe in Sherlock and didn't want John to be alone.

They make a night of it, remembering and laughing and grieving.

And then they meet up, maybe once a month or so. Friendships (or more) develop.

Bonus: John completely breaks down that first night, and Henry and/or Lestrade trip all over themselves trying to comfort him.

Double Bonus: Molly never comes. She can't stand to see them all so sad while she knows the truth.

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anonymous January 16 2012, 19:50:12 UTC
WHat a beautiful group ♥ This prompt is lovely: seconded!

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anonymous January 17 2012, 02:32:46 UTC
What a lovely idea.

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In love, in faith unbroken dwell 1/?? anonymous January 17 2012, 04:06:55 UTC
Two weeks after--after, John decides it's safe to go to the pub. He'd stayed away, mindful of a family tendency to find solutions in the bottom of a bottle, but it's been two very hard, very long weeks, and he can't stand the flat anymore. It doesn't hurt anymore to look at the two armchairs by the fireplace or the depression in the sofa, but only because it hurts all the time, and so there's no difference between one moment or the next, or the one before.

So he puts on his jacket and goes down the pub.

Lestrade is there. John stiffens in the doorway, but Lestrade catches his eye and shifts, uncomfortably, on his seat. He turns to leave, but he sees (observes) the stubble on Lestrade's face, his wrinkled tie, the bags under his eyes, his crumpled sleeves. He straightens his shoulders, marches into the pub, and takes the seat next to Lestrade without asking if it's taken. He says to the bartender, "I'll have whatever he's having ( ... )

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Re: In love, in faith unbroken dwell 2/?? anonymous January 17 2012, 04:08:01 UTC
"Dr. John Watson." Helen Stoner wraps her arms around his shoulders and pecks the air above both his cheeks. John is so startled by the familiarity that he doesn't speak, at first, and Helen pulls away to give him a sad smile. "Percy and I thought we'd come and offer our support." The stocky, bearded Percy Armitage waves. "I know--" She clears her throat. "It must be hard ( ... )

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REPOST due to formatting fail / In love, in faith unbroken dwell 1/?? anonymous January 17 2012, 04:09:28 UTC
"Dr. John Watson." Helen Stoner wraps her arms around his shoulders and pecks the air above both his cheeks. John is so startled by the familiarity that he doesn't speak, at first, and Helen pulls away to give him a sad smile. "Percy and I thought we'd come and offer our support." The stocky, bearded Percy Armitage waves. "I know--" She clears her throat. "It must be hard ( ... )

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In love, in faith unbroken dwell 3/4 anonymous January 17 2012, 06:13:59 UTC
"Are you ever going to tell us about the melting laptop?" asks Chris.

"I'd much rather know about the time Sherlock stole a bus," says Helen.

"Oh, Christ." John rubs his hand across his face; he can see Mrs. Hudson watching him from between his fingers, and he lets his hand fall to the table and smiles. It feels stiff and unfamiliar on his face, like the corners of his mouth might split open to show all the sorrow, but he can speak without his throat rebelling against him. "All right. Um. Well, flip a coin, then. Heads, melting laptop, tails, bus."

The coin comes up tails, but nobody seems really disappointed as John launches into the story. And after that, since the crowd is already wound up, he tells them the story of the melting laptop, too. And then after that it's late, and there are trains to catch, and everyone shakes hands and says goodbye until next time, same place. Angelo waves goodbye from the doorway of the restaurant, and Mrs. Hudson and John begin the walk back to the flat together ( ... )

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END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 anonymous January 17 2012, 06:24:30 UTC
John stops in the door and looks over his shoulder. He sees Lestrade look up and freeze, and then Chris picks up on his lead and does the same, and before long the entire table is staring and silent. John feels more than sees Sherlock stiffen and grabs him by the sleeve before he can dart away ( ... )

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 agreywood January 17 2012, 07:58:07 UTC
There's so many things in this I really love (the slow healing of John & Lestrade's friendship, Johns two steps forward & one step back grief, the bits and pieces of life moving forward, Molly's reluctance to tell any stories when she can't tell the only one that matters), but these are the two bits that really stood out to me:

This Sherlock is nearly gaunt, his hair is longer, and there are lines in his face that weren't there before. He looks over his shoulder too frequently.
He stops at Henry Knight and Helen Stoner, frowning. "You got married," he says, incredulously.

John puts Sherlock in a corner seat, facing the door, with his back against the wall, and feels Sherlock relax.

and then

It says so much about how Sherlock spent his time away (traumatically), how he's changed (can't turn off the smart, but he can turn off the smart ass), and how his relationship with John hasn't.

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 natgel January 17 2012, 18:17:45 UTC
Oh my gosh I love this. It's gorgoues. There's so much I love I don't know what to quote. The first, painful pub meeting. John sobbing in a stall. Molly, who can but won't tell any stories. Sherlock's return and "they're your friends".

Brilliant.

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 anonymous January 18 2012, 00:12:29 UTC
This is such a fantastic portrayal of how long and arduous the grieving process is, in such a short piece of fic. I adored reading it, and there were just so many moments that touched me I cannot even quote them.

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 joking January 18 2012, 06:00:15 UTC
All wonderful, but the ending is the best <3

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 alsionbower January 19 2012, 07:28:46 UTC
Oh Brilliant!!

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Re: END In love, in faith unbroken dwell 4/4 anonymous January 20 2012, 19:49:52 UTC
AUGH!

I am in love with this! It's so sweet and adorable and... guh! Thank you!

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OP heretherebefic January 22 2012, 09:28:43 UTC
De-anoning because I LOVE YOU.

I just. I can't. I want to pick out all my favorite parts of this but it's just ALL OF THE PARTS. ALL OF THEM. *flails*

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DE-ANON Re: OP coloredink January 25 2012, 04:16:57 UTC
Wonderful! :D I'm so glad you like it!

I de-anoned for the fic, and it is up on my LJ, DW, and AO3; you can find links to all the versions here.

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