Prompting Part XXIV

Jan 16, 2012 09:01

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Sherlock/Inception crossover anonymous January 16 2012, 17:06:34 UTC
From this picture http://www.tumblr.com/photo/1280/sketchlock/15841797797/1/tumblr_lxm6ieleKa1qaohpw by mlysza and her 'prompt'.

John dies and Sherlock begins to steadily lose himself in his own dream world because he wants to see John, while other people look on helplessly. Oh and of course, Sherlock's totem is his phone, and he knows he's in the dream world if John texts back.

ANGST OR WHATEVER ANON

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Re: FILLING anonymous January 16 2012, 17:11:53 UTC
DUDE I AM ON THIS LIKE WHITE ON RICE

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Re: FILLING anonymous January 17 2012, 01:22:58 UTC
For some reason my previous post didn't come up, but just so you know anon, I am on it.

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FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come anonymous January 17 2012, 13:36:17 UTC
If anyone finds it hard to keep up with the dream lingo and the little twists of reality vs. dream, I recommend you to remember the scene between Dom and Ariadne, when he first shows her how to warp reality (then Mal shows up and stabs her). In that scene, Dom is the subject/mark, and he provides the projections and the details of the dream. Ariadne is the dreamer/extractor and she manipulates the layout and location of Dom’s dream.

It’s a bit… disjointed. I could try and explain it as reflecting dream states but those are excuses. Frankly I was in weird and fluctuating moods while writing this. So it’s more like crazy writing than any attempt at creativity lol. Also I don’t know how phone services work in England but when we text an old number there’s no reply; it’s only when we call it that it tells us it’s not in service. So let’s just go with that.

Warning: Character death, mentions of drug use, extremely unhealthy behaviour (Hey, sounds like a regular old Sherlock episode - *sobs ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 2/? anonymous January 17 2012, 13:50:24 UTC
“Sherlock, you have to stop this.” Mycroft says to him one afternoon, and he’s sitting in one of the couches, because even Mycroft isn’t stupid enough to sit in John’s armchair. Sherlock ignores him and eats mechanically from one of the takeout boxes he has delivered to his door now. John is nowhere in sight, and a prickle of anxiety steals up his spine. He picks up his phone.

Where are you?
SHHe puts his phone down and Mycroft heaves a heavy sigh from his fat form. He has gained at least ten pounds since he last saw him. Stress, Sherlock deduces absently ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 3/? anonymous January 17 2012, 13:57:31 UTC
Sherlock is sitting in his chair, staring into blank space, like he usually does when he’s thinking. Where is John? He picks up his phone.

John?
SH

He waits.

Need you back here NOW.
SH

His leg jitters. He glares it into stilling.

Could be dangerous.
SH

There. That always got John running.

John where are you?
SH

Sherlock is pacing around the flat, chewing at his lip, an old childhood habit he’d always hated. Thought he got rid of it, deleted it.

I think you should quit work and never leave the flat. I’d entertain you.
SHHe’s wearing a hole into the rug, and he feels torn at the edges, unravelling like one of John’s ugly jumpers. How long has it been? Past the normal response time? He hasn’t been counting. Why hasn’t he been counting? His eyes flicker to the PASIV case, sleek silver and unobtrusive, shoved under the chair. He could go under right now, regardless of whether this is reality or dream ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 3/? anonymous January 17 2012, 23:32:44 UTC
Oh my God this hurts. This is so well done. Can't wait for the next part!

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 4/? anonymous January 18 2012, 13:45:30 UTC
Mrs Hudson is pottering around the place again, tutting at the mess and the strewn boxes of food. Sherlock blinks up at the ceiling and fingers his left wrist. He pats his pockets.

“Mrs Hudson, where is my phone?” He says loudly, and her voice carries from the kitchen.

“I haven’t seen it dear.” A lie. He swings his legs over and sits up.

“Mrs Hudson, where is the PASIV?” His voice is low.

Mrs Hudson is quiet, then, “Mycroft has them.”

Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck fuckHe scrambles up and runs into the kitchen, and she’s standing there wringing her hands together, a guilty but defiant expression on her face, the usual look for a moron who thinks they’ve done the right thing ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 5/? anonymous January 18 2012, 13:51:38 UTC
They arrive in a dilapidated building, damp with mildew and coloured with rust. Mycroft’s usual intimidation M.O. Sherlock is out of the car almost before it stops moving. Every second without John is bearing down on him, a weight like a grey existence, crushing him down, squeezing his lungs. Every second without John is like losing him again, and he can’t ever delete John’s absence from his mind. He can’t delete anything about John.

The fat fuck is sitting at a table, legs folded primly and his umbrella resting at his side. Two cups of tea with a fresh pot are steaming, and Sherlock sneers at Mycroft’s fetish with tradition and etiquette. He sits down and presses his fingertips together hard to hide their trembling.

“This is what it comes down to, is it? Force me to realise I can no longer tell dream from reality?” He says, venom curdling his words.

“Can you?” Mycroft asks quietly, and gives him that irritating head tilt, Sherlock hates that head tilt ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 6/? anonymous January 18 2012, 14:06:55 UTC
Sherlock glares at his brother, and looks down at the gun again. He’s seething ( ... )

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THIS OP IS IN TEARS anonymous January 18 2012, 16:38:32 UTC
THANK YOU ANON THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. Oh christ my heart feels torn asunder AGAIN. IT'S ALL I EVER WANTED. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

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Re: THIS OP IS IN TEARS anonymous January 19 2012, 08:43:01 UTC
Ah! I'm glad you like it! Sorry about taking so long, this last bit is just... a bit hard to wrangle. Silly thing.

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 7/? anonymous January 19 2012, 12:19:34 UTC
Ending One: Shutdown
(Warnings: Character death by suicide, too much angst and all the creys)Sherlock pulls the trigger ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 8/10 anonymous January 19 2012, 12:49:22 UTC
Ending Two: Restart
(Character resurrection, because I am the world’s biggest schmoop)

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Sherlock’s finger is slipping on the trigger.

“Sherlock.” Mycroft says. Sherlock waits for him to finish, because at the end, he owes his brother this much. “John is alive.”

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He lowers the gun and points it at the ground, because his hands are shaking so hard he doesn’t trust himself.

[Query]“What?” He says, and his voice sounds nothing like himself. His chest feels like a shipwreck. He feels like he would be screaming if he could breathe at all ( ... )

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Re: FILL: I have asked to be where no storms come 9/10 anonymous January 19 2012, 12:51:22 UTC
The detective snaps his head around and there’s John, standing in the doorway, a year older, a year wiser, a year sadder, a year harder. Sherlock stands up so quickly the chair falls over. He takes a shaky step, then two, towards John, and John is moving forward too, his wonderfully, beautifully rumpled face folding into a heartbreaking smile. The tight twist in Sherlock’s chest is dissolving now, melting through his bones like liquid gold. Sherlock stumbles at the last moment, one knee suddenly giving out beneath him and he’s falling again, but John catches him, laughing.

“Christ Sherlock, you’re like a giraffe on skates.”

Sherlock laughs a little at that, because the John in his mind would never have said that. He wraps himself around John and breathes quiet and broken into John’s hair. His doctor has wrapped his arms around Sherlock firmly, and it is far better than anything Sherlock has ever imagined. Could ever have imagined. Sherlock struggles not to cry ( ... )

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FINISHED: I have asked to be where no storms come 10/10 aestheticmuse January 19 2012, 13:16:25 UTC
[Restart - Redux]
(Schmoop woop de boop)Sherlock is lying on the couch as he looks over John’s blog and loudly scoffs at certain parts. “Moran killed man-eating tigers and that makes him intimidating? Please, this is ridiculous. Man-eating tigers are usually the ones who are too old to hunt anything else; they’d hardly present a challenge to even the most amateur of hunters ( ... )

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