Unconventional kissing
anonymous
September 26 2011, 05:09:33 UTC
I would love to see Sherlock lying with his head in John's lap, completely passive, while John gently uses his fingers to probe and caress Sherlock's mouth--basically kissing him with his fingers. Sherlock looks so beautiful with his eyes closed and his lips parted around John's knuckles...
Bonus if Sherlock's gone unexpectedly pliant after John giving him a head massage.
Fill: Fingers on Lips 1amismatched37September 29 2011, 02:18:40 UTC
John arrived home from his shift at the surgery to an unsettlingly dark and (even more unsettilingly) quiet flat. "Sherlock?" He called, flicking on a light. John was met with a cry, and quickly spotted a supine figure on the sofa, one arm cast dramatically over his face, though John realized soon after that the lamp he had turned on was directly over the grimacing consulting detective. He extinguished the light, and spoke more softly. "Are you all right
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Fingers on Lips 1bmismatched37September 29 2011, 02:19:17 UTC
John was suddenly struck by how simply beautiful his partner looked, stretched out and submissive, completely trusting. He was sure that Sherlock endeavored to ensure that few, if any, people found him in this position. With his free hand, John pushed a few errant curls off of Sherlock's forehead, though they gradually found their way back as he ran his fingers instead over the short dark hairs of Sherlock's eyebrows. Sherlock hummed softly as John's fingertips moved lightly, tracing the crescents of lighter eyelashes, then the long elegant bridge to the tip of Sherlock's nose, followed by the impossible sweep of cheekbone. He took special notice of the contrast of Sherlock's soft cheeks and strong line of jaw, tracing one side to the round of the chin, then turned his hand so the back of it could appreciate the other side
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Fingers on Lips 1cmismatched37September 29 2011, 02:20:01 UTC
"Sorry," John whispered, massaging the base of Sherlock's head with one hand and resting the fingertips of the other on his lips. Sherlock's features relaxed gradually, and John, a wry smile seeping into his words, murmured, "You shouldn't make promises you don't intend to keep
( ... )
Fingers on Lips a/nmismatched37September 29 2011, 02:20:29 UTC
a/n: this was such a sexy prompt, i hope it was what you were looking for! please feel free to point out what worked and what didn't--my beta has a hands-on-face squick (but read it anyway--thanks, swk ♥) so second opinions on those parts especially are more than welcome. thank you so much for this lovely prompt, op, and thanks for reading!
Quiet, calm, peaceful--and in a lovely way (shush, Sherlock!) ;-)
Since you asked for concrit, just one little thing to get out of the way: Sherlock's mouth becoming "increasingly lubricated" jarred me a bit because, well. Lube. "Wetter," perhaps?
Anyhow! I love John's attentiveness to the shapes of Sherlock's face and mouth, and Sherlock's small responses. And the hand kissing at the end with Sherlock being just as thorough about exploring John. And this line...
John continued caressing Sherlock's lips with his fingers until the breaths whispering between them had settled into the even tempo of sleep.
Can't think of a nicer lullaby than that. *happy sigh* Thank you for the sweetly intimate fill. <3
Bonus if Sherlock's gone unexpectedly pliant after John giving him a head massage.
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Since you asked for concrit, just one little thing to get out of the way: Sherlock's mouth becoming "increasingly lubricated" jarred me a bit because, well. Lube. "Wetter," perhaps?
Anyhow! I love John's attentiveness to the shapes of Sherlock's face and mouth, and Sherlock's small responses. And the hand kissing at the end with Sherlock being just as thorough about exploring John. And this line...
John continued caressing Sherlock's lips with his fingers until the breaths whispering between them had settled into the even tempo of sleep.
Can't think of a nicer lullaby than that. *happy sigh* Thank you for the sweetly intimate fill. <3
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i'm thrilled that you liked it! thank you again for the fabulous prompt, and then for the kind feedback ♥
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