Remix of hiddenlacuna: “Let the Punishment Fit the Crime”

[nox_candida]

Original Story:
Author: HiddenLacuna
Title & Link: Who Was That Masked Man?
Pairings & Rating: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson, Explicit
Warnings/Content Notes: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings

Remix Story:
Author: kedgeree11
Title: Let the Punishment Fit the Crime
Pairings & Rating: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson, Explicit
Warnings/Content Notes: None
Beta:

Comments

[burnin_up_a_sun]

Aaaaaaaagh but I'm dyin! This was a gorgeous remix! It's the first I've ever read and how high you've set the bar! Awesome job!

Re: FLAIL

[kedgeree11]

I'm so glad you liked it. I love the original. I've always been intimidated to write in ACD 'verse, myself. Your story is sexy but also has such a great sense of play between them. And I love the way that by being so subtle about who has actually broken into Watson's room, you really bring the reader in on the roleplay. It was a joy to read and to remix. :)

[snarryfool]

That's terrific! As hot as the weather it describes.

[nolongerguest]

That it's NOW acceptable to sleep in Sherlock's room is just the perfect touch to sum up the whole arc [of John's emotional state.]

Well done.

[unovis]

Nice remix, switching 'verses and playing to the different personalities. This John more the bully, and off to take Sherlock's bedroom as well. Good job.