Title: Learning Curve Author: padawan_aneiki Rating/Pairing: G/None Characters: Samantha Carter and John Sheppard Summary: Sam and John have a chat following the events of Reunion.
Bravo!! Very nice!! I could really feel Sam's uncertainty here as she tries to get the feel of the city, the job, and the people she'll be working with. :)
Awww this was a sweet piece and I think a wonderful segway into the upcoming season. Both Colonels guarded, but respectful, trying to find common ground while establishing their own lines, limits and control.
A tiny thing for next time, the POVS shifted a few times so it took me a second to keep up with whose thoughts were whose, but still a very lovely fic. Nice job!
Thank you very much, dear. I'm glad you liked it so well.
*nods* The POV thing I tend to have a bit of trouble with in that sense, especially in a smaller fic where everything is all crammed in there together. LOL Thanks tho'!
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*huggles* I'm glad you liked it! :D
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A tiny thing for next time, the POVS shifted a few times so it took me a second to keep up with whose thoughts were whose, but still a very lovely fic. Nice job!
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*nods* The POV thing I tend to have a bit of trouble with in that sense, especially in a smaller fic where everything is all crammed in there together. LOL Thanks tho'!
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