Reunion tag - Learning Curve

Oct 16, 2007 19:17

Title: Learning Curve
Author: padawan_aneiki
Rating/Pairing: G/None
Characters: Samantha Carter and John Sheppard
Summary: Sam and John have a chat following the events of Reunion.

Learning Curve )

fiction-carter, 4th season episode tags, author-padawan_aneiki, fiction-john

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karri_kln1671 October 17 2007, 02:10:03 UTC
*claps* Terrific job! I'm very impressed you took on Carter. :)

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padawan_aneiki October 17 2007, 02:33:22 UTC
Thankies, m'dear! Carter is brand new territory for me! I haven't seen all that many SG-1 eps so she's the grand experiment at the moment. LOL :)

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katstale October 17 2007, 02:31:53 UTC
Bravo!! Very nice!! I could really feel Sam's uncertainty here as she tries to get the feel of the city, the job, and the people she'll be working with. :)

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padawan_aneiki October 17 2007, 02:34:17 UTC
Thankies. :D I'm glad you think I got it right...New muse showed up today and she was blonde! ;)

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kriadydragon October 17 2007, 03:03:26 UTC
Very nice, the characterization well done. You made it very easy to picture these two saying what you had them say.

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padawan_aneiki October 17 2007, 03:36:50 UTC
Thank you! I must admit, I find it a relief that folks think I got Carter down okay. :)

*huggles* I'm glad you liked it! :D

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kristen999 October 17 2007, 03:11:05 UTC
Awww this was a sweet piece and I think a wonderful segway into the upcoming season. Both Colonels guarded, but respectful, trying to find common ground while establishing their own lines, limits and control.

A tiny thing for next time, the POVS shifted a few times so it took me a second to keep up with whose thoughts were whose, but still a very lovely fic. Nice job!

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padawan_aneiki October 17 2007, 03:38:16 UTC
Thank you very much, dear. I'm glad you liked it so well.

*nods* The POV thing I tend to have a bit of trouble with in that sense, especially in a smaller fic where everything is all crammed in there together. LOL Thanks tho'!

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wildcat88 October 17 2007, 03:46:56 UTC
Very nice. Carter's hesitancy is tangible and perfectly plausible after the events of Reunion. Well done.

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padawan_aneiki October 17 2007, 03:58:17 UTC
Thank you! She decided she needed to be part of my muses' guild. ;) I'm glad you thought the was believable. :D

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