Comments | sheps_atlantis: Mind, Body, Soul

kriadydragon in sheps_atlantis

Mind, Body, Soul - The Long Goodbye Tag

Jul 17, 2007 05:17

I wrote this a while ago for the Sheppard H/C Community, so you might have read it, but thought it fit with the challenge. It's been edited some. This is my first post to this Community.

Title: Mind, Body, Soul
Author: Kriadydragon
Rating: PG-13 for violence and some language
Characters: John, Thalan
Summary: Just what was Thalan like?

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author-kriadydragon, 2nd season episode tags, fiction-john, fiction-whump

Comments 8

karri_kln1671 July 17 2007, 22:51:54 UTC

Ooooh, masterful job of whumping him without actually whumping him. Fantastic! *squee*

kriadydragon July 18 2007, 03:20:29 UTC

I will always find a way to whump shep. Thanks.

karri_kln1671 July 17 2007, 22:53:23 UTC

Welcome to the community, too. Very glad to see you here! :D

kriadydragon July 18 2007, 03:24:11 UTC

Thanks.

padawan_aneiki July 17 2007, 23:42:46 UTC

Oh most definitely welcome to the community as KLN said!!! Woah...amazing take on this. Well done...

and I have to admit...this line killed me: “I'd tell you to kiss my ass, but you're wearing it and I'm not that flexible.”

ROFL...too funny. :) *claps enthusiastically*

kriadydragon July 18 2007, 03:22:25 UTC

Thank you. I also liked that particular line. Shep mouthiness is fun to write.

wildcat88 July 18 2007, 03:12:24 UTC

Great to have you post here. I loved this the first time I read it, and it's just as good the second time. You really know how to whump that boy. *grin*

kriadydragon July 18 2007, 03:23:23 UTC

Whump is my passion. Thanks for reading again.