Comments | sheps_atlantis: Ficathon entry

padawan_aneiki in sheps_atlantis

Ficathon entry - Of Wraith and Men

Jun 21, 2009 19:22

Title: Of Wraith and Men

Author: Rating/Pairing: PG/None

Character: John and Todd, with a smattering of Rodney and Keller.

Summary: What happens after well-laid plans go awry. Written for Seramercury who requested whump, angst, Shep centric, Shep/Weir - managed most of them.

( Of Wraith and Men )

1st quarterly ficathon, author-padawan_aneiki

Comments 22

novembersga September 23 2009, 04:05:46 UTC

Wonderful story. I love this. Great character voices and you did a nice job maintaining Todd and John's odd way of interacting. (John and Todd have a very unique relationship so to speak.)

It was like watching an episode. I like Todd doting over Sheppard like a mother hen yet still being 'Todd' and Sheppard still being 'Sheppard' (did that make any sense?)

Nice Shep whump too, btw. :)

padawan_aneiki September 23 2009, 04:52:32 UTC

Thank you! :) Glad you liked it and found the character voices on target. :)

And hey, what's a tale without a little Shep whump? ;)

a_blackpanther September 23 2009, 20:34:41 UTC

Sheppard and Todd! One of the best things in the last two seasons of Atlantis was Todd and his relationship with Sheppard. Somehow they've managed to be more friends than enemies.

As such, your fic is made of awesome! You got down their love-hate relationship down to a T. I could hear the characters peaking in my head as i read trough this. Fantastic job!

padawan_aneiki September 24 2009, 12:41:21 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it...Good to know that the experiment worked, y'know? ;) I do like the dynamic between the two, I must admit. :)

ninja007 September 25 2009, 00:09:31 UTC

Sorry this feedback took so long, but you know RL..

Loved this! Absolutely loved this!

Well written and Sheppard and Todd were completely in 'character'.

Well done!

padawan_aneiki September 25 2009, 01:02:20 UTC

:) Thank you very much! Glad you found them to be "in character," that is a great compliment. :) Especially as this was my first attempt at Todd. :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

ninja007 September 25 2009, 00:12:25 UTC

PS: I agree with the above feedback. Love the Todd and Sheppard relationship and your fic kicks ass! I can't get enough of fics with these two!

padawan_aneiki September 25 2009, 01:02:44 UTC

LOL Again, thank you very much. :)

seramercury September 26 2009, 11:27:13 UTC

That was just awesome, Terri! Thank you!! Woo hoo!! You've got the perfect amount of whump for me here. LOL!!!

padawan_aneiki September 26 2009, 15:33:14 UTC

YAY!!! So glad that you liked it, m'dear. Always the true test of one of these, is if the person you're scribblin' for likes it. :D LOL

:)