Before the Whales Come Crashing Down by linziday (1st Quarterly Ficathon)

Aug 16, 2009 16:43


Title: Before the Whales Come Crashing Down

Author: linziday

Rating: PG13

Word count: about 2,200

Warnings: Mild language, traumatic hallucinations

Spoilers: Up to the second half of season 2.

Summary: One person. Awake five days. And this time it's not Rodney.

Prompt: Written for
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1st quarterly ficathon, fiction-angst, author-linziday, fiction-rodney, fiction-john, fiction-whump

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padawan_aneiki August 17 2009, 02:37:42 UTC
SQUEEE! I love it. :D Total luv! I adored it. :) So cool how Rodney's experiences kept John's Iratus hallucinations at bay, and how he's never had to worry about the little whales because the team kept those away...

:D :D :D Thankies!!!!

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linziday August 17 2009, 02:50:47 UTC
Oh, thank God! I'm so glad you liked it. I wasn't totally happy with it and really worried it wasn't any good and wasn't quite what you wanted. So I'm thrilled you're happy with it! *does happy writer dance* :D

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padawan_aneiki August 17 2009, 02:53:47 UTC
I think it's adorable. :) Shep takes one on the chin for the team, so to speak, and the team carries him through it, and in this case, Rodney in particular. :) Luff!

:D

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linziday August 17 2009, 03:04:57 UTC
Yay! :D

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tridget August 17 2009, 04:45:17 UTC
So that's what the sleep deprivation info was being used for! You made really good use of the information on the effects. It was great Shep whump. I like the way Rodney was there for his friend and the ending was very touching. Rodney's whale hallucinations were priceless.

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linziday August 17 2009, 04:50:08 UTC
LOL... yes! Thanks to everyone over at the whumpers page for helping me out with that. The info was awesome! I'm not sure if I got it quire right, but it seems like there's some wiggle room there for different people, so I just say any split from the norm is all because of Sheppard. :)

I'm glad you liked it. The end was my favorite part... and the description of the whale hallucinations. :D

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drufan August 17 2009, 04:47:11 UTC
I thought this was adorable. The Pffft! really just made me giggle. And whales with tiny teeth...scary tiny teeth but the image is just so strange.

Good story!

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linziday August 17 2009, 04:54:57 UTC
Thank you! I really didn't plan the "Pfft" at all, but Sheppard just came out with it and, well, what else could I do? :)

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obsessed1o1 August 17 2009, 12:33:17 UTC
Oh just lovely! Sleep deprived Shep is a favourite of mine and a little team bonding mixed in for good measure!

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linziday August 18 2009, 00:57:02 UTC
I love sleep deprived anyone. You just can't beat the loopiness. :)

Glad you liked it!

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gottalovev August 17 2009, 20:01:30 UTC
tiny whales! with teeth! the perfect hallucination for Rodney. and makes perfect sense that it would be bugs for John. love how you did this, that Rodney is now safe before of the team, and so is John. lovely

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linziday August 18 2009, 01:00:15 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I have a soft spot for the team feeling safe with each other. :)

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