Friend or Foe?

Mar 22, 2009 17:40

Title: Friend or Foe?
Author: Titan5
Rating: PG-13
Category: Gen, H/C
Timeline: Set after Common Ground, mid to late season 3.
Summary: John needs rescuing; it's up to Todd to do it. Written for Bi-Weekly Challenge #5.

Friend or Foe )

author-titan5, bi-weekly challenge, fiction-john, fiction-wraith

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kristen999 March 22 2009, 23:31:51 UTC

Poor John. Always getting into trouble. I'm surprised the team have not been sought out of captured for their weapons more often. This was fun, tense little adventure. A cool little seaway into John's odd relationship with Todd and all their future tension.

Nice to see you writing again.

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titan5 March 22 2009, 23:34:38 UTC
Thanks. Obviously I'm rusty. I haven't had much time or desire lately, but I'm hoping both will change.

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“Of all the luck" black_raven135 March 22 2009, 23:34:26 UTC
***ROFL***
Take a bow please......just too good.
This stuff is like eating popcorn, once
you start, you can't stop and you don't want
anything else.
HOWEVER I must ask
>:-/
Why are guys so hard on him???
:P
Seriously, excellent story......
BTW, I have been reading your 'Fade to Black' and just cracked up with the five year old and
room service remarks......

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Re: “Of all the luck" titan5 March 22 2009, 23:42:16 UTC
Thank you! I guess we are pretty hard on the poor guy.

Wow, Fade to Black. Haven't thought about that one in a while. Merlin and I sure picked on John in that one. Ahhh, fun times.

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Re: Merlin and I sure picked on John in that one. black_raven135 March 23 2009, 00:03:22 UTC
**nods**
He is such a delectable subject.....
:P
I wonder if Flanigan ever envisioned that
his character would take on life of it own?
IMO, if SGA never came back, it would
continue as there are so many possibilities
for Sheppard, e.g. surely in the Pegasus there are even worse nightmares than the Wraith
e.g. wonder what he would do if he ran into Predator?
LOL

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Re: Merlin and I sure picked on John in that one. titan5 March 23 2009, 00:23:58 UTC
Hmmm, Sheppard vs. Predator. How about Sheppard vs. Alien? Then there's Godzilla attacks Atlantis. All the possibilities!!!

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karri_kln1671 March 23 2009, 00:49:39 UTC
*claps* Excellent, titan! :D

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titan5 March 23 2009, 00:50:52 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked!!

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tridget March 23 2009, 00:55:17 UTC
Wonderful! A nice balance of jeopardy and hurt for John and his team being there at the end. I loved how you fit the relationship with Todd in there too.

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titan5 March 23 2009, 01:02:02 UTC
Thank you. If there's a way to get a little team in there, I'll do it. I've been in such a team mood lately.

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coolbreeze1 March 23 2009, 00:59:46 UTC
Love it! I'm so intrigued with the relationship between Todd and Sheppard. There are endless stories that need to be written exploring this - I'm glad you've given us another glimpse of it.

I like the idea too that Sheppard was taken for his weapons. They are pretty advanced compared to the weapons of most of the people they encounter. Well done!!

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titan5 March 23 2009, 01:11:20 UTC
Yeah, I love the Todd/John stuff, but I liked Common Ground the best. I love his little chuckle - he's got such a sense of humor for a Wraith.

And I figured surely someone in the Pegasus Galaxy would covet their weapons enough to act on it.

Many thanks!!

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