Comments | sheps_atlantis: Farewell to Stargate Atlantis Ficathon post for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/maddie_amber">maddie

seramercury in sheps_atlantis

Farewell to Stargate Atlantis Ficathon post for maddie_amber

Mar 01, 2009 10:17

Title: Words Left Unwritten
Author: maddie_amber
Rating: PG
Characters: Carson, Rodney
Disclaimer: Stargate Atlantis and all related characters belong to people who aren't me.
Prompt: This was written for reen212000 who requested some “angsty h/c. And the boys. And Carson” with no OC’s, ships or Keller. Well, this is actually the second attempt to fill that order ( Read more... )

fiction-friendship, fiction-carson, fiction-rodney, author-maddie_amber, fication-farewell to sga, fiction-whump

Comments 14

maddie_amber March 1 2009, 17:38:31 UTC

Oops! I meant to thank Bruni for the beta. Her insightful comments were very helpful.

seramercury March 1 2009, 19:11:45 UTC

Got it! :)

katstale March 1 2009, 21:20:48 UTC

I quite enjoyed this. :) I especially loved the realization by Carson at the end--very nice! Lovely exchange between Carson and Rodney there also; I love the little peek into Sheppard's psyche through their conversation. I also enjoyed the way you portrayed Carson's exhaustion and emotions after yet another close call by one of his friends. It wasn't my prompt, but if it had been? I'd certainly have been very pleased with the result!

maddie_amber March 1 2009, 21:22:57 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

gottaluvit123 March 1 2009, 23:31:41 UTC

Oh. Nice! I really liked this. It felt very true to the characters.

padawan_aneiki March 2 2009, 02:58:48 UTC

Ahh lovely...I liked this quite a bit.

writerjc March 2 2009, 05:10:44 UTC

I really liked this :) Loved the whump and team love from Carson's perspective, also the backdrop of his own introspection. The pen from his mum was a very nice touch. All of the characters rang true in even such a small space. Nice work. :)