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The Enemy You Know, 4/?

Nov 24, 2008 20:31

Title: The Enemy You Know, 4/?
Author: Padawan_aneiki
Rating/Pairing: PG/None
Characters: The whole gang
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( Chapter Four, part 2/2 )

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Comments 10

timespirt November 25 2008, 12:42:27 UTC

Hi,

Where does this story start, because I'm all confused with the way you have the chapters? Do you have this fic all in one place where I can get it?

Thank You
Time

padawan_aneiki November 25 2008, 14:25:32 UTC

Each chapter is posted in two parts, because they're long chapters. The links at the bottom of the first part of this chapter will take you to previous chapters. It's also posted on fanfiction.net, however if you want to check it out there, except for Chapter 4; I haven't gotten to put the new chapter up there yet.

ladyniko November 26 2008, 18:31:33 UTC

Oh wow, it's been a heck of a roller coaster so far for our favorite whump target of affection... I wonder if the drug is what's affecting his connection to Atlantis now? Hrmmm....

I am so glad to read this, as that I was in a dearth of good updated SGA fic after Brainstorm last week. (urgh! :p)

Good work and hurry up and post more soon! :)

padawan_aneiki November 27 2008, 00:52:11 UTC

Roller coaster indeed... :)

And I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D Thanks for the review!

Chapter 5 has a whole sentence on it so far. LOL

rawa_02 November 27 2008, 00:24:27 UTC

Well I'm all caught up and looking forward to chapter 5. I'm tracking this so I don't lose it.

padawan_aneiki November 27 2008, 00:52:50 UTC

Thank you. :) Glad you liked it! :D Chapter 5 has barely begun, but it's begun. :)

titan5 November 29 2008, 01:44:12 UTC

I've been evil. I just kept reading, thinking I'd stop at the next break to comment. Then I'd just keep going to the next chapter part. I blame you, actually, for making it so good I couldn't stop until now - you know, since there isn't any more to read yet.

Anyway, wonderful descriptions of what John is going through and great character interactions. Love the way his team is supporting him - exactly as expected. Halling was perfect. And I can't help but wonder if there is a connection between John's problems and Atlantis's - probably just me always looking for John/Atlantis moments.

padawan_aneiki November 29 2008, 01:57:22 UTC

Hi! :) *chuckles* I don't consider you evil, m'dear ;)

Thanks much for the review and the compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Enemy Chap. 5 is barely started...I've got a coupla tags on tap at the moment. But I shall be attacking Chap. 5 soon. :)

ossiriand10 December 27 2008, 14:57:06 UTC

My heart was sinking with every enumeration Radek has recorded. Will he be the one to figure out the connection or McKay? I have a feeling Ronon and Teyla will be lead into a trap when they get back to Itsura. Halling and the rest of the Athosians will join their off-world investigation. Yay! We seldom see them work together with the Atlantis expedition. I'm looking forward to how they'll flush out the enemy. Please... please don't leave us like this. :)

padawan_aneiki December 28 2008, 04:36:24 UTC

I shan't leave you like that. LOL So long as the boys continue to cooperate with my braincells, Chapter Five will come to be. ;)