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The Days After - The Prodigal tag

Nov 10, 2008 21:41

Title: The Days After
Author: Titan5
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Stargate Atlantis does not belong to me.
Summary: A tag to The Prodigal because Michael hit John hard enough there would have been a few consequences. This picks up shortly after the show ended.

( The Day After )

author-titan5, weekend challenge, 5th season episode tags, fiction-john, fiction-whump

Comments 20

baranyandi November 11 2008, 09:54:12 UTC

Great little fic. Although this injury seems tad severe (a bad concussion might have been enough for my tastes), I desperately wanted a tag for this ep, so I'm happy to take what I can get :)

titan5 November 11 2008, 12:08:18 UTC

Thanks. You can always do what I do when I can't find a tag like what I want - write one!! I'm sure lots of us would like to read!!

wonderful anonymous November 11 2008, 17:15:45 UTC

This was very believable, very real. Great team moments.

Excellent little talk between John and Teyla over what she had to do. (thought it was fabulously well done on the show... so few moments yet both John and Teyla and Michael knew what was going to happen).

The recovery for John and the team nicely done. *snicker* knee! eheheheheh.

Personally, if Michael said he would clone the baby... and he's already cloned Carson... you know he has a clone or five of himself waiting in the wings. This is just too good of bad guy to loose.

Great job with this story. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Tracy-TheEverPresentNaggingCubedOne

Re: wonderful titan5 November 12 2008, 03:07:16 UTC

OH, help, not a Michael clone. I didn't even think of that. Do you watch SG1 - makes me think of all the Baal clones (they had some really good puns in that one).

Thank you much and I'm glad you liked the "knee" joke. I couldn't resist.

obsessed1o1 November 11 2008, 20:38:57 UTC

Ah this is what we needed - some follow up because he really did get beat up bad! I love the teams concern! I actually like Keller in this - which believe me, takes a lot and i loooove Ronon and Rodney's kodak moment!

Lovely as always me dear

xx

titan5 November 12 2008, 03:42:01 UTC

I still think no one could get pounded on that much and just have a little cut on their face. Unless - hey, maybe John is a Replicator.

And I would love to actually SEE that Kodak moment with Ronon and Rodney. That would be SWEET!!

featherfour November 15 2008, 07:39:50 UTC

That was some very tasty whump. Thank you.

titan5 November 15 2008, 14:49:02 UTC

Thank you. I may not be good for much else, but I can whump.