Hover by LinziDay (The Shrine missing scene)

[linziday]

Title: Hover
Author: linziday
Words: 1,600
Genre/Rating: Gen, PG13 (I think there's some swearing)
Spoilers: It's a missing scene from The Shrine. So.

Disclaimers: If I owned them, the show would run forever. So, obviously....

Summary: Sheppard didn't hover. Advance, retreat, slouch... sure. But hover? Never. Even if he had been standing just outside

Comments

[scifigeek72]

Wonderful wonderful tag. Well done.

[linziday]

Thank you! :)

[seramercury]

Excellent job! I loved the team interaction and the not really hovering movie night. :)

[linziday]

Thanks! Gotta love John and his not really hovering. :)

[wildcat88]

This was terrific! The tone of it fits perfectly with the ep, and the team love is spot on. I like how Ronon was the one who didn't think they should leave and how Sheppard justified it. Because he was definitely in denial over how bad off Rodney was and he wouldn't consider the fact that Rodney might be scared to wake up alone. Really well done.

[linziday]

Thank you! :)

I agree that Sheppard was definitely in denial over how bad off Rodney was, and I think Ronon had a lot of guilt going on in that ep. (From some comments made on screen, I have a feeling Ronon got on McKay's case about whining when they finally made it into the jumper on the planet, and he felt guilty about that afterward when McKay turned out to have been seriously ill. That, in fact, will probaly be my next missing scene fic! :)

I'm glad you liked it!

[vita_candeo]

Great tag :)

[linziday]

Thanks!

[titan5]

That is so sweet - I love team moments. Ronon being all protective is very much like he was in the episode. I love how far their friendship has come. And John noticing Rodney calling him John. Very nice and appropriate addition!!

[linziday]

Thank you! I love the Ronon/Rodney friendship, too. They're such opposites sometimes, but it really works and is so endearing. :)

I'm glad you liked my addition.