Five Times the Team Depended on Each Other for Survival (Ficathon)

[linziday]

Title: Five Times the Team Depended on Each Other for Survival
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[karri_kln1671]

*claps* Nicely done! Beautiful teamness in them all. :D

[linziday]

Thank you!! :)

[rawa_02]

That was perfect.

[linziday]

*vbg* Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

[titan5]

That was GREAT!! I'm in such a team mood right now and that really hit home in every possible direction. Love the humor intertwined with some whump and good friendship moments.

[linziday]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I don't think I do whump all that well (certainly not as well as others here), so I' relieved to hear it read okay.

[padawan_aneiki]

Ohh, LOVE this...from season to season...Fantabulous! :) *claps* Well done!

[linziday]

*blushes* Thank you! I tried to show how the team's friendship/bond evolved from one season to the next. Not sure if I was sucessful with that, but I'm glad to hear the season to season thing worked for you.

[negolith2]

That was wonderful. There were so many lines that made me grin like a fool, and I guffawed at Rodney telling Carson the breakout was Sheppard's idea.

You did an excellent job of showing Rodney's progress from walking ego to a caring member of the 'family'. I thought it really came out in the cave scene, especially since there was some of his old self in that as well as the guy who's actually paid attention and knows his teammates now.

And you have their voices down pat. Nice work!!

[linziday]

Squee! :) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad there seemed to be a Rodney progression from one snippet/season to the next.

Originally I had Rodney telling Carson the breakout had been his idea. But then I thought no, Rodney wouldn't take that on himself, not in season 2 and not for a guy he'd only recently met. Besides, why take the blame for an infirmary breakout when Sheppard's around? ;0)