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karri_kln1671 in sheps_atlantis

"Home" tag - "Ghosts and Memories"

Jul 01, 2008 11:38

Title: Ghosts and Memories
Author: Me *grins and waves*
Rating/Pairing: G/None
Characters: Liz and John
Summary: A tag for "Home" in which really nothing much happens. It was written as a lead in for an AR-series of stories to be posted on Forsaken Atlantis in which the Atlantis expedition wasn't rescued by Earth at the end of Season One, but ( Read more... )

1st season episode tags, author-karri, fiction-john

Comments 5

padawan_aneiki July 2 2008, 00:48:53 UTC

OOOH *claps happily* YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!

I love the description of his eyes as being "mercurial," all those emotions and things so close and yet so far away, right there in his gaze.

Also loved the line at the end...Earth is just ghosts and memories; Atlantis is home. :D

Fab dear. :D I hope it *does* spark some more ideas along the way. :D

karri_kln1671 July 2 2008, 01:07:02 UTC

*hugs* Thanks, dearling.

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karri_kln1671 July 2 2008, 01:09:32 UTC

*pats you* Thanks for reading, ang. It would be interesting to peek into his head to find out things like that, wouldn't it.

titan5 July 2 2008, 02:27:57 UTC

I loved your depiction of a troubled John and his attempts at finding a way to save Atlantis so they could have the hope of retaking her. But the last sentence was absolutely the BEST!!

karri_kln1671 July 2 2008, 02:44:46 UTC

Thanks, Titan. :D Things have changed a lot since First Season, but it seemed to me it must have felt that way especially right after that experience.