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Tabula Rasa tag - Out of Reach

Nov 09, 2007 22:38

Title: Out of Reach
Author: Padawan_aneiki
Rating/Pairing: G/None
Characters: Lorne, with a smidge of Sheppard
Summary: Lorne's perspective during the events of Tabula Rasa

( Out of Reach )

fiction-lorne, 4th season episode tags, author-padawan_aneiki

Comments 10

kristen999 November 10 2007, 06:15:34 UTC

This was very cool reading how teh events took place for Lorne. You really captured the spirit of things, the Major knowing deep down he was trying to protect his people, but without understading why.

I knew taking those stims would mess with his head even more. Now all we need is a missing scene from Lorne during DG, since he almost killed his CO.

Very nice.

padawan_aneiki November 10 2007, 15:02:50 UTC

Thank you very much...I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) And yes, I figured also those little pills would catch up to him sooner or later! And since there's only so much that can be touched on in however many minutes that are left after commercials... Anyhow, thanks for the review!!

Oh. And I've done my DG tag for this challenge, but maybe I'll hafta go back and do that Lorne POV... ;)

x_erikah_x November 10 2007, 10:07:24 UTC

Very, very nice. It's so hard finding good Lorne fics and you did it beautifully.

padawan_aneiki November 10 2007, 15:19:40 UTC

Thank you. :) Glad you liked it! This was my first foray into really focusing on Lorne, and it was a fun piece to do. :)

bramble_rose November 10 2007, 18:44:06 UTC

Very happy to see Lorne's pov, and always love his inter-actions w/Sheppard :-) Thanks for this!

padawan_aneiki November 10 2007, 19:20:50 UTC

heheh Thank you. :) I thought it would be a slightly different POV to tackle since the obvious ones would be John or Ronon or Rodney. :) Glad you liked it!!

astromist November 10 2007, 23:44:24 UTC

Cool tag. I liked seeing Lorne's thoughts through all of this. That last order really stuck with him, didn't it? He was doing his best to try to protect his people, even when he didn't remember who he was or what he was trying to protect them from. Cool POV.

padawan_aneiki November 11 2007, 00:51:42 UTC

:D I thought it might be a little different way to go, and hey, Lorne has cute bare feet so... (a la Doppleganger) he had to make an appearance in the tagfic realm. ;)

wildcat88 November 12 2007, 18:39:18 UTC

Nice Lorne POV. You've captured his confusion mixed with determination to do his duty very well. I especially like the line about realizing he could hand over his mission to his CO.

padawan_aneiki November 13 2007, 02:50:45 UTC

Thankies, m'dear. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) And I thought that would be an appropriate sense of relief for him to know "it" (whatever it was) wasn't hanging on his shoulders any longer.