Fic: Breathe by linziday

[linziday]

Title: Breathe
Rating: PG13 (swearing, violence off screen)
Spoilers:  Takes place sometime around season 5, so character spoilers
Genre:  H/C, Action/Adventure, Angst,
Characters: Team, plus Carson 
Word Count: ~7,000
Summary:  An assasination attempt leaves John injured and his team determined to find the would-be killer.

Written for kristen999 , who asked

Comments

[kriadydragon]

I really, really liked this. Intense, whumpy, and loved John drawing out the assassin with his team as back up rather than going it alone, and loved their conversation at the end. Excellent. Very excellent :D

[linziday]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm not nearly as good with Shep whum as you are, so I take it as a very high compliment that you liked it. :)

[skeddy_kat]

This was wonderful. I loved the way the team rallied around John. I also liked John's thoughts. The last sentence was perfect.

[linziday]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Kristen999's prompt was awesome.

[sgafan]

oh I like that! I liked that John couldn't talk and yet you still really conveyed his frustration so well. And the team *luffs team* Right there for him even in the end. Wonderful!

Great job! :D

[linziday]

*luffs team, too* Thank you!

[syble4]

I really liked this. Nice plot, good character voices and lots of wonderful Shep whump. :)

[linziday]

Thanks! I'm glad the Shep whump worked.

[admiralandrea]

Really loved this. Especially all the HAL 2001 references. I LOL'd when John got the tablet to say I’m sorry, Rodney. I’m afraid I can’t do that.

Interesting concept as well, I liked your OCs as well as the teamy goodness.

[linziday]

LOL! Thank you. That line just popped into my head. :) I'm glad you liked the fic and the OCs.