Walking Away (2/2)

May 29, 2008 22:19


Title: Walking Away (2/2)
Author: Obsessed1
Character(s): John Sheppard and team.
Genre(s): Stargate Atlantis: H/C -Angst
Rating: T
Warnings: Dark.Some themes people may find disturbing.
Summary: Sometimes walking away is the only option.

It was the middle of the night when he awoke, breathing harsh rapid breaths, sweating and balling the sheets up in ( Read more... )

genre: angst, rating: pg-13, team, author: obsessed1o1, fanfic

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roxy_palace May 29 2008, 22:09:12 UTC
This was a really interesting character study. I think the length was good too - a much longer fic could have been too melodramatic. I thik the smaller piece focussed the impact a little more. Really good work. Thanks for posting!

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wraithfodder May 30 2008, 01:01:41 UTC
Interesting character study. I wouldn't have guessed the ending! Good job :)

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titan5 May 30 2008, 03:16:40 UTC
It was perfect like it is. I didn't see the whole "fake Sheppard out" thing coming. That was nice. I love that Ronon knows him that well. Awesome, awesome job. Oh, and kudos to Carter for making the right choice.

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sgatazmy May 30 2008, 04:10:56 UTC
Ah, you do write Ronon perfectly. This is exactly how I would expect him to handle Sheppard in this situation.

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wildcat88 June 2 2008, 16:11:17 UTC
What a nice unexpected ending. Well done.

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