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Fic: Torment 15/20

Aug 28, 2007 00:08

Title: Torment
Author: chokolaj
Rating: T
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Summary: The title sums it up pretty well. Shep whump!

( Chapter 15 )

genre: gen, author: chokolaj, fanfic

Comments 6

winter_elf August 28 2007, 06:22:13 UTC

*whimper* such whump!!! biting my fingernails in wait!

x_erikah_x August 28 2007, 10:49:27 UTC

Oh, Shep!!! The angst! Post more soon!

jackfan2 August 28 2007, 13:24:14 UTC

Eeesh.. you would chose to make THAT your last chapter to post today *sighs*

Well, great chapter. Loved the separate voices in alerting Weir and the other doctors to Sheppard's condition, and how they all responded.

I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!

linzi5 August 28 2007, 14:27:12 UTC

Oh no! Poor Sheppy! What have they done to him? Tell me he's not a vegatable? Sniff...I want him back to his normal self...sob. I can't wait for more!

wildcat88 August 28 2007, 17:33:33 UTC

Sometimes death wasn’t the worst thing that could happen.

Oooo, powerful last line. Really nice chapter.