Comments | sheppard_hc: Tag for Kodiak's "Save Me"

sholio in sheppard_hc

Tag for Kodiak's "Save Me"

Aug 26, 2007 23:50

Title: Help Me
Author: friendshipper
Word Count: 2600
Rating: PG
Summary: This is a rather schmoopily self-indulgent tag forkodiak_bear's story Save Me. Read that one first -- it's very good!

( Sand to the horizon, sand and more sand... )

genre: missing scene, challenge #9, author: friendshipper

Comments 35

loriel_eris August 27 2007, 08:22:38 UTC

Oh god, this was just what I needed. I'm having a perfectly despicable Monday morning, and this went a long way picking me up. *g*

I loved John and Rodney and their friendship and they way they could only talk thru the closed door. And I loved that they did actually talk.

sholio August 27 2007, 18:23:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I could offer a bit of a pick-me-up. :)

I wasn't sure how much talking they'd actually be able to do ... but I wanted to give them a little closure, and figured it could only happen if they weren't face to face.

alipeeps August 27 2007, 11:26:08 UTC

Oh that was just lovely! Woozy John and McKay/Sheppard bonding.. just fabulous. Love how you portrayed JOhn's hallucinations and recovery from his POV.

sholio August 27 2007, 18:24:38 UTC

I'm such a sucker for characters that are a little bit woozy and loopy. Especially when it gets them saying things they wouldn't otherwise say!

Thank you!

iboneki August 27 2007, 12:27:37 UTC

It'd be nice to start every Monday like this. A great tag to a great story. Cool perspective from John at the beginning.

sholio August 27 2007, 18:25:07 UTC

Thank you very much! The hallucinations were fun to write, but surprisingly difficult.

padawan_aneiki August 27 2007, 13:02:50 UTC

Ohh this was just a lovely way to start the day and week. :D Nicely, nicely done... :)

sholio August 27 2007, 18:25:20 UTC

Yay, thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

linzi5 August 27 2007, 14:17:24 UTC

Lovely! I really enjoyed this. Great friendship between Sheppard and McKay, and a great infirmary scene too, so I'm happy! Well done, and thanks for sharing. :)

sholio August 27 2007, 18:26:18 UTC

Heh, I was just saying the other day to kriadydragon that I don't really write infirmary scenes anymore because it's so tough to come up with new variations, and then what do I do but go and write an infirmary scene! *snort* I just can't help myself! I'm glad you liked it. :)