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Nov 23, 2009 11:45

Fandom: Stargate Universe ( Read more... )

stargate: universe, fic, pg-13

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sansdatelimite November 23 2009, 02:10:36 UTC
Aww, poor Eli. Watching someone kill themseleves is a terrifying experience, it stays with you. Eli's too sweet for something like that to happen to him. This is a little heart breaking. :,(

One nitpick though, Colonial is in reference to a time frame. Colonel is a rank. (I grew up in a military family, so making mistakes like this woulda got my ass beat.)

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sheneya November 23 2009, 02:19:13 UTC
Thanks for the nitpick, this is why I'm looking for a beta, glad you read the rest of the story though, Sorry for the heart owies, but that's kinda how it's meant to go in the story, so it's a job fairly well done for me.

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jennithefluffy1 November 23 2009, 10:23:58 UTC
Oh gosh it's so sad but a very good story, I wanna go give Eli a big hug now!
In answer to your Kino question, according to the official mgm stargate page it is Kino =)
Keep writing!

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sheneya November 23 2009, 10:40:56 UTC
Thank you, I'm hoping to find a beta of some sort sooner or later, I'm glad you liked it though.

Yay, I got it right.

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jennithefluffy1 November 23 2009, 11:25:56 UTC
I would offer, but it's been years since I actually wrote any fic and I'm only just getting back into it, so I wouldn't be much use I'm afraid. But I'm sure someone infinitely more qualified will come along sooner or later! =]

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sheneya November 23 2009, 11:32:35 UTC
Probably when the SGU specific fans get going it'll be easier.

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sheneya November 24 2009, 03:09:43 UTC
Glad you liked it and thank you for the help.

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sexycazzy November 24 2009, 21:14:43 UTC
wow - ohhh poor Eli *sobs* that was an really interesting story.

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sheneya November 24 2009, 23:56:37 UTC
I must admit, I can go pretty dark in my fics, this was sad, but I've written a lot darker for BBC's Merlin and the like.

Glad you liked it.

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fyrewyre November 25 2009, 05:49:43 UTC
The only problem I had with this is that you said Eli was still a teenager, he's twenty five.

Other than that: GAH :Sadface:

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sheneya November 25 2009, 06:46:22 UTC
Really, he seems so teenaged, I'm 25 as well, and I'm probably about as much of a Sci-Fi nut as him though.

What episode gives his age, My brain must have bypassed it when I was watching on Wisevid.

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fyrewyre November 25 2009, 14:38:14 UTC
I don't remember what episode it was specifically, but in darkness they did mention that Eli dropped out of MIT.

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sheneya November 25 2009, 22:33:40 UTC
That means I'm going to have to watch all the episodes again.

Oh, The Pain, The Paaain.

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