Aww, poor Eli. Watching someone kill themseleves is a terrifying experience, it stays with you. Eli's too sweet for something like that to happen to him. This is a little heart breaking. :,(
One nitpick though, Colonial is in reference to a time frame. Colonel is a rank. (I grew up in a military family, so making mistakes like this woulda got my ass beat.)
Thanks for the nitpick, this is why I'm looking for a beta, glad you read the rest of the story though, Sorry for the heart owies, but that's kinda how it's meant to go in the story, so it's a job fairly well done for me.
Oh gosh it's so sad but a very good story, I wanna go give Eli a big hug now! In answer to your Kino question, according to the official mgm stargate page it is Kino =) Keep writing!
I would offer, but it's been years since I actually wrote any fic and I'm only just getting back into it, so I wouldn't be much use I'm afraid. But I'm sure someone infinitely more qualified will come along sooner or later! =]
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One nitpick though, Colonial is in reference to a time frame. Colonel is a rank. (I grew up in a military family, so making mistakes like this woulda got my ass beat.)
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In answer to your Kino question, according to the official mgm stargate page it is Kino =)
Keep writing!
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Yay, I got it right.
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Glad you liked it.
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Other than that: GAH :Sadface:
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What episode gives his age, My brain must have bypassed it when I was watching on Wisevid.
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Oh, The Pain, The Paaain.
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