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sofiemae May 31 2010, 03:19:08 UTC
Cara is secretly untying her ropes and then she is going to tackle Dahlia away from Kahlan and beat her to a bloody pulp before escaping with Kahlan in tow.

Dahlia is truly vicious in this. And I don't know whether I love it or hate it.

Please...must have more! *begs*

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shemp_o2stk May 31 2010, 10:56:09 UTC
*giggles*

GO IMAGINARY CARA! BEAT THE P-AHOOP! outta her!

Dahlia is fun, to write, to play with, she's clearly effected by Cara being there, and Cara's changes... and not happy about her own reaction, which equals getting violent. gotta love it.

I already started writing more not long after i posted this, i couldnt help myself. :)

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silver_parpar May 31 2010, 05:17:12 UTC
OH, someone's gonna get a FANTASTIC beat down for whats going on right now! lol is it bad that im excited for that?

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shemp_o2stk May 31 2010, 11:00:07 UTC
not if you love Kahlan the way Cara does.... be excited, nothing too wrong with a bit of violence in fanfic. :D

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sqeeee lifelove8 May 31 2010, 08:51:34 UTC
that last line really got me
it was such a cliffhanger
guhhhh...moreeee pleasee

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Re: sqeeee shemp_o2stk May 31 2010, 11:24:13 UTC
Got you in a good or bad or other way?

More on t'way :)

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eternal_moonie May 31 2010, 10:34:43 UTC
Totally AWESOME story!!!

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shemp_o2stk May 31 2010, 11:49:47 UTC
Huge thanks at your enjoyment :D means too much to really say

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jolo_65 May 31 2010, 12:32:15 UTC
Really enjoying this story....Poor Cara & Kahlan:(

Gotta say I'm liking how u bring Dahlia to life....thx for sharing

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shemp_o2stk May 31 2010, 13:54:37 UTC
you are very welcome, and thanks for enjoying it.... well not enjoying their pain but well y'know... the story.. :)

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