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Dreams (Team Angst)

Aug 31, 2011 08:13

Title: Wake Me Up (Team Angst)
Author: Marsabi
Pairing: Zach/Shaun
Summary: Zach and Shaun are living together with Cody, when a misunderstanding threatens their happiness. Thanks to Rhiannonhero for looking it over for me
Rating : NC-17
Warning: Sexual Content and Angst ( Read more... )

[f] fic, {challenge} angst vs schmoop: r01, {challenge} angst vs schmoop, [a] marsabi

Comments 15

aljc100 August 31 2011, 12:29:09 UTC

Oh, I just loved this! Jealous Zach + Pissed Off Shaun = perfection!! It was tricky to pick out a favourite bit, but I particularly liked this line - "He’d arranged his life like a child, based in blind faith in the man he’d fallen in love with." Great detail, really captured the emotion - great job! Definitely my favourite so far.

marsabi August 31 2011, 16:33:46 UTC

Thanks so much!

sleeper6 August 31 2011, 13:11:05 UTC

Jealous!Zach was enjoyable to read though I could feel his pain and doubts. Great idea and great story!

marsabi August 31 2011, 16:34:15 UTC

Jealous Zach was fun to write...Thanks for reading it!

pairatime August 31 2011, 15:50:17 UTC

great use of the ex. and great jealous Zach

marsabi August 31 2011, 16:34:35 UTC

Thanks so much! I appreciate that!

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marsabi August 31 2011, 18:07:22 UTC

IC is a great compliment-thanks! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.

srtawalker August 31 2011, 22:39:56 UTC

Great!

marsabi September 1 2011, 11:36:08 UTC

Thanks so much!