Fic: You Don't Blong To People Forever

[mrsmarit]

Title: You Don't Belong To People Forever

Author: mrsmarit

Rating: PG

Pairing: ToriZach

Disclaimer: The characters are not mine, only the words

Words:  1969

This is inspired by the fact that we never seem to the Zach/Shaun relationship from Tori's point of view. Hope you enjoy.

Comments

[spikedluv]

That was great! Loved seeing Zach's growth through Tori's eyes. This line was perfect, it is beautiful and full of every emotion that Tori always wanted Zach to express to her is here on this wall and she knows who it is for and it isn’t her. As was the last line. Nice job. *g*

[mrsmarit]

Glad you liked it. Tori seems to be neglected in Shelter fan fic so I wanted to give the poor girl a voice.

[cogzzz]

Heeyy ... that was fun! Yeah, that last line is great. I also love the bit about Tori's cat(!) and how she was just cutting Zach off for his own good - works perfectly with how the scene is played in the film. And I love getting a peek at what might have been said at Tori's that night before Zach made up with Shaun. Thanks!

[mrsmarit]

Thanks for your reply. Glad you liked the part about the cat, I kind of added that as an after thought and I always wondered what Zach and Tori talked about the night before Zach tries to get Shaun back.

[yana_ambf]

Love this glimpse into Tori's POV! I esp. love that she didn't really have a guy over when Zach came back, she just couldn't let him in, for his own good as well as hers. Who the hell knows how long he would have played that on again/off again, back and forth if she hadn't almost forced him to go off and face himself without her. More, plz!

[mrsmarit]

Yana

Glad you liked it. It came alot easier than I thought it would. I need to finish up the other 2 fanfics I am working on. I keep working on them in pieces and it feels like I am never going to get them done..

[roseguel]

beautiful!!! :-)) rose

[figaro23]

I enjoyed this.