Fic: The Butterfly Effect Conundrum (3/5)

[arabian]

Title: The Butterfly Effect Conundrum
Author: arabian/JenniferH
Rating: PG (for language)
Word Count: 764
Summary: The boys are gone and Penny's pining, but her mind and body are at odds.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I'm a Sheldon/Penny fan. Doesn't that make such a disclaimer unnecessary at this point in time?
Spoilers: General knowledge of both

Comments

[jazzrose343]

Wow. Intense stuff.

Again so well written. The detail fits in so well with Penny's effort to defend the fact that she does NOT have feelings for Sheldon!

"With the way you've gone on and on about him, I could write a chapter on him alone in the book I'm not presently writing but may if my client list remains so short."

This was my favourite line it summed up everything perfectly!

I cannot wait to read the next part!

[arabian]

Thank you; I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

[takineko]

Dang Sheldon, you messed up a woman psychologically. You're just that good.

[arabian]

LOL!!!

[elsiesnuffin]

Penny is being pretty darn stubborn here, isn't she?

This:

"Look, I do appreciate you listening about this, I just -- you said it: You don't know Sheldon, so if you did, you'd understand why I just have to be right about this."

is BRILLIANT! I love how desperate she is for any other answer here.

Really good stuff darlin'.

[arabian]

Aww, thank you. I just think that if it ever happened that Penny became aware of feelings first, while Sheldon would spend months diagnosing it, Penny would spend months trying to find some other explanation. (Not to say, she spends months in this story, I'm just saying if it were to happen on the show ...)

[tash81]

Hmm...seems to me Penny is conflicted. I am loving this fic, this is something that I could actually see happening on the show, which I always refreshing to read. I love the fact you have Penny touching on Sheldon's "asexuality" since that is one of the greatest arguments we have against our ship.

Can't wait for more!

[arabian]

Aww, thank you. This is definitely what I envisioned making much more sense than her actually suddenly wanting Leonard. Whatever.

I really need to do some major editing on the next part, so it will definitely be a longer wait, sorry.

[danceonstardust]

*ggs* I know I said I read right away but got carried away with other things. I LOVE IT. Her denial and the therapist is like the producers and actors on the show. So awesome.

♥

[arabian]

LOL! I didn't even think of that, but yeah, it is totally like the cast/crew denial. Hee!