FIC: Sidelines

Oct 16, 2008 09:54

Title: Sidelines
Author: shelbecat
Rating: T
Spoilers: 3x02
Summary: Written for fnl_laundrylist challenge #28, prompt #10 Is Lyla seeing Tim for Tim? If she's trying to make him into something he's not, what sort of Frankenstein's monster of a boyfriend is she creating? A splash of Chris, a dash of Jason and a pinch of Jesus? Who is her perfect man?

It took a long time to realize that being happy didn’t make her a sinner. )

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elzed October 16 2008, 14:07:50 UTC
Oh, cat, so right. Especially the bit about Tim not thinking what he looked like with his pants off next to Tyra (I thought the exact same thing); and the whole - he wouldn't open her car door but he;d take a punch in the face for her...

I was quite anti Tim/Lyla in the first season - not least because she got on my nerves - but I have grown to like their relationship, even if it looks doomed half the time (although Buddy is doing everything to make it last in his misguided parental efforts to keep the two apart).

And your line about Tim's body being even harder - well, hello there, mind, meet gutter...

;)

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shelbecat October 16 2008, 14:43:53 UTC
Tim is so dumb he's actually lovable. And somehow, surprisingly to me, I really get S3 Lyla. I was not a fan before now.

But maybe it's just the Tim.

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elzed October 16 2008, 15:50:48 UTC
Yes, I feel the same. It must be the Tim.

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tlace October 16 2008, 14:09:26 UTC
Oh my. You've done it AGAIN!! Lovely, sweet stuff!!

Your version of how Lyla's heart and head works is SPOT ON! And when a "missing scene" is so well done, it makes the canon moments even more beautiful!

Keep writing Tim/Lyla please :D

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shelbecat October 16 2008, 14:45:06 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comments! I'm making canon up as I go along so hopefully it's not totally off (I'd love to find out what actually happened between Lyla and Chris - so far I've done cheating and amicable split...what else can I throw at them? ;))

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jandjsalmon October 16 2008, 14:11:39 UTC
Awww. you even made me like her a little bit more. Great job, really pretty. :D

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shelbecat October 16 2008, 14:45:42 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm making myself like Lyla despite my best efforts not to :)

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jandjsalmon October 16 2008, 15:22:36 UTC
Oh, good for you for trying! I'm still in the 'praying he will see the light and kick the cheating whore to the curb' camp. But I applaud your efforts. I'm sure you will be the happy one in the end. *sighs*

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kadymae October 16 2008, 15:28:43 UTC
He was never going to be the guy that owned a proper suit. He was never going to open a car door for her or take her hand just because they were walking down a flight of stairs. He was the guy that would take a punch in the face for her. He was the guy that would eat raw pigeon and not complain, even once, because he thought it was what she wanted.

I laughed out loud at this -- so sweet!.

Yeah, he'll rarely do any of the more traditional shows of love, but eating raw pidgeon for you? If that's not devotion, then what is?

(Hell, it means he'll eat the worst dinner you ever make for him and appreciate it because you cared enough to take the time.)

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rachel_wilder October 17 2008, 18:46:59 UTC
I have to admit--I'm still in shock over your newfound Tim/Lyla love, but we've all taken a walk on the dark side at some point.

And I'm bummed that I was so busy this week there was no time for writing or reading...this damned busy life!

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