Comments | shegrewhearts: 'aint nobody's business if I do

shegrewhearts

'aint nobody's business if I do

Apr 27, 2012 21:48

Title: 'aint nobody's business if I do

Author: shegrewhearts

Fandom/Characters: Doctor Who, Eleven/River

Rating: NC-17

Word count: ~3200

Summary: "One of those few times she and the Doctor run into each other by accident, River Song is drunk enough to black out."

( Sometimes, when she feels safe enough and sad enough, River Song will get dangerously drunk. )

fanfic: doctor who, eleventh doctor, eleven/river, river song

Comments 6

easytheretyger April 28 2012, 06:51:46 UTC

Oh wow!

This is absolutely fantastic. I adore how you write the sloppy drunkenness and River trying to control what information she's letting out before completely giving up :)

There's so much affection mixed in with the angst and the sex.

And their drunken falling asleep at the end, <3

All in all, gorgeously written, what a lovely way to wake up on a Saturday morning.

shegrewhearts April 30 2012, 23:57:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you got the affection in there, since I wasn't sure how much came through. There will always be some kind of fondness between the two of them, I believe, no matter the circumstances.

And I'm happy you liked the sloppy drunkenness, which is exactly the state of mind I was going for. Thank you for such a splendid review!

eve11 April 29 2012, 00:15:41 UTC

Guh. Hot. Mysterious. Love River's slip about faking his own death; the Doctor can be such a bastard. But yes, this was awesome.

shegrewhearts April 30 2012, 23:59:02 UTC

Haha thank you! Yeah, it's true, though I adore the Doctor, he's a complete and utter bastard on occasion.

jadethe2nd April 29 2012, 20:20:52 UTC

Oh, this is lovely. I can feel River's drunken haze in all the prose. Sweet and perfect :)

shegrewhearts May 1 2012, 00:00:30 UTC

Oh my, thanks so much! I'm really pleased you got that general feel; I was really hoping that the prose would parallel her haze.