Comments | sheep_emilia: Ficlet: José Mourinho/Cristiano Ronaldo, NC-17

sheep_emilia

Ficlet: José Mourinho/Cristiano Ronaldo, NC-17

Mar 16, 2011 19:58

Title: Stay
Pairing: José Mourinho/Cristiano Ronaldo
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: no
Word Count: 313
Disclaimer: Not true. As simple as that.
Summary: Being offered comfort without having to ask for it is perhaps the greatest gift of them all.
Notes: Written for the prompt "looking for/finding comfort" during commentporn weekend.

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football slash fic, comment porn, cristiano ronaldo, José Mourinho, nc-17, real people slash

Comments 24

mimusha March 18 2011, 11:44:14 UTC

The sex scene was hot but what i liked the most is how you write their emotions. I can feel Cristiano´s turmoil on this,his fear of relying on so much in just one person. And Mourinho just understands his nature very well,knowing just how to get through him.

On Real Madrid´s last game, Mourinho didn´t want let it go Cristiano´s hand after he was subbed out and I don´t know why but I think that scene fits with your fic.

sheep_emilia March 18 2011, 12:18:50 UTC

Thank you!
The emotions were really more of a point here, so I'm glad it came across. Tbh, it was written a while ago, with a reference to another game, but I'm glad it could work now too :)