Title: Scars and Ink
Author: Shealynn88
Rating: NC-17 (language, violence, sexual situations)
Warnings: slash, angry boy-touching
Summary: When Logan confronts Weevil about Lilly, the one-upsmanship gets a little out of hand.
Disclaimer: They're not mine, I'm just borrowing.
Author's Note: Big 'Thank you!' to my beta,
decollete. She is awesome, and she put
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You rock!
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Snag 'em if you like. The icon's creator is included in the userpic keywords (unless I don't know who the artist is.)
A Brokeback Mountain icon? *sigh*
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Loved this:
"You gotta be crazy, you think I'm lettin' you down there," because Logan would have totally done it. And probably with some teeth. ;)
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Yeah, Weevil's horny, but he's not stupid. :)
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The characterization was perfect. The snarky back-and-forth was spot on and the fighting kicked ass. Every bit of it was believable. I loved how the violent tension quickly turned into sexual tension and I loved the acknowledgment of it and the *calm* in the second section. It balanced so well.
And,hey, you found a way to make me warm up to Logan again! Will wonders never cease?
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I'm so glad the characterization worked for you! And the fighting...I have a thing for angry boy-touching. Do you think it shows? :)
You have to love Logan's snark, even if the rest of him annoys the crap out of you. Right? You have to! :)-
You know...or not...
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Weevil was without his gang, without his leather jacket, and without his bike. Logan was strangely, temporarily, without his ego.
This is absolutely, poetically, beautiful.
Finally, Weevil had to break the silence. "Yeah, so, I guess I'll see you."
Preferably somewhere with a bed? *blinks innocently*
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Thank you so much for your kind words, and for letting me know what worked for you. I liked that first line, and then I worried it was too...pretentious, but damn it, I was in love, so I left it. Now I'm glad I did. :) So, thank you!!
Hmmm...more smutty goodness?? We'll have to see how the muses play it... (I am only a slave, after all!)
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