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Fic: Man is Evil

Jan 27, 2011 09:26

Title: Man is Evil
Author: she_burns1
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "There was a time when I could have gotten this for free."
Disclaimer: Community belongs to Dan Harmon, NBC/Universal/Sony
Warning: Dark, AU/Future!fic
Author’s Note: I always swore I would never write 'Community' fic. Damn you, Porn BattleXI (prompt word: study ( Read more... )

porn battle, jeff/annie, community, fan fiction

Comments 12

simplelyric January 27 2011, 15:45:47 UTC

Wow. This is hot, sharp, and wicked in so many ways. It's so easy to picture/hear, too. Part of me really wants sweet Jeff/Annie shipping to happen in canon, but you've written an awesome twist on that idea.

she_burns1 January 28 2011, 16:18:21 UTC

Thanks! I was pretty worried about this one, so your comments really hit the spot! ;)

summerofsoaps January 27 2011, 16:43:04 UTC

Oh, my. This is dark and delicious and hot and heartbreaking. It's beautifully written, and the images are perfect. I love your Jeff, and I love everything about your escort Annie, especially the fact that she still writes with purple pens. ♥

she_burns1 January 28 2011, 16:19:17 UTC

Thanks muchly! I figured Annie would do her damndest to change, but, really, there's only so much you can alter about yourself. Thanks again for reading.

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she_burns1 January 28 2011, 16:19:55 UTC

Oh good, I hoped it was in character - I tried my best to achieve that! Thanks for reading! <3

entaiaime January 27 2011, 22:34:03 UTC

Dude. That was amazing and original. I am very interested to know if there is going to be a sequel. I want him to call her again. =)

P.S. I love your current song! Adele's voice gives me goosebumps.

she_burns1 January 28 2011, 16:20:54 UTC

I don't know if I'll write a sequel, but thank you for the kind words! Adele has a great voice - so sexy! <3

wallows January 28 2011, 03:15:02 UTC

So hot...So wrong...So right. I love the seeming take charge-ness Annie is here, and Jeff's discomfiture is so well written, wonderful layers of conflicting emotions, it's a delicious moment when he gives in. I love that Annie at the heart of it is still just that girl she was, the one who loves purple pens.

she_burns1 January 28 2011, 16:22:30 UTC

I figured if Annie ever did go down this path she'd be really take-charge and professional about the whole thing. I was going in a 'Secret Diary of a Call Girl' vein.

Thanks for reading!