Comments | shawol_haven: Stay Out of the Deep End

jinkibumiminho in shawol_haven

Stay Out of the Deep End

Apr 15, 2011 00:04

Title: Stay Out of the Deep End
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: PG-13 (crude language, intense situations)
Focus/Pairing: bandfic/ninja!OTP
Wordcount: 1625
Disclaimer: The characters aren’t mine, the story is.
Prompt: Both

( “Hyung, please?” Taemin cried across the pool, turning on the aegyo full blast. “We have to leave tonight. This is our last chance to play together.”
Sunset in Los Angeles was fast approaching, and they would soon be on the red-eye back to Korea with the rest of their company’s performers.
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☆ challenge: 011

Comments 27

MOD yunho April 16 2011, 03:04:53 UTC

Congrats, your entry is approved for the competition! Voting will begin on April 16th, feel free to cross post your fic until then and let all your friends know about your entry once voting has started.

Thanks for entering!

kyttenfae April 16 2011, 08:09:00 UTC

This was adorable, sniffly, and then adorable again! I really loved the cuteness of the interactions at the beginning, it was so /them/, and then the sweetness at the end killed me. *glomps*

jinkibumiminho April 17 2011, 01:01:19 UTC

[glomps you right back WA-style]

I actuallly made myself cry when I was writing the sniffly parts. What's up with that?

Thanks for commenting! [and leaving me a cute Jinki icon]

Stay Out of the Deep End fic challenge jinkibumiminho April 20 2011, 16:52:52 UTC

http://shawol-haven.livejournal.com/49659.html
Please consider voting!
Hope today is better than yesterday [hug]!

jinkibumiminho April 20 2011, 23:40:21 UTC

[big kiss]
Did you have a nice spring day on your side of the mountain? It's been lovely on the Puget Sound side.

acornmama April 18 2011, 01:38:22 UTC

Here I was all prepared for cute and maybe even sassy. Then it got really bad. And at the end you put in that lovely-ness . Feels good. Thank you.

jinkibumiminho April 18 2011, 01:58:53 UTC

Thanks for reading and enjoying. The ballot was supposed to be up by now, I'll post when it's available...just in case!

Stay Out of the Deep End fic challenge jinkibumiminho April 20 2011, 16:54:35 UTC

http://shawol-haven.livejournal.com/49659.html
Please consider voting!
I'm off to work on some of those WIPs...

a_life_defiant April 18 2011, 02:30:15 UTC

Whenever they had occasion to break into teams, they nearly always grouped the same way: Minho and Key on one side; and Jinki, Jonghyun, and Taemin on the other. Minho was clearly the most athletic and competitive of the group, which naturally made him captain of one team. Jinki, despite his reputation for clumsiness, had enviable coordination and reflexes, and surpassed Minho in terms of brute strength, so he captained the second team. Kibum had been an athlete in school and moved with a certain amount of grace, helping him compensate for his slow reaction time. Jonghyun and Taemin together…perhaps the kindest thing to say was that the usual two-on-three match-up was in no way unfair to the two-man team.

*giggles forever* XD

oh wait.....TT__TT Jjong!

*flails*

ok...he's saved......I'm ok now. I think...

Jonghyun’s thoughts turned to the beautiful girl he’d been exchanging text messages with for the last month ( ... )

jinkibumiminho April 18 2011, 02:40:01 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I actually made myself sniffle when I wrote the Jongji part; how sappy am I?
I'll let you know when the ballot is up...just in case

Stay Out of the Deep End jinkibumiminho April 20 2011, 16:56:30 UTC

Aloha -- thanks for reading! They have the ballot available.
http://shawol-haven.livejournal.com/49659.html
Please consider voting?
I'm off to "work on" Jinki...

min7girl April 18 2011, 04:28:37 UTC

This was wonderful! The angst after the cute playful fun, then the romance to end it. Nice array of emotions. And then the promise of everyone getting together...just wonderful!

jinkibumiminho April 18 2011, 04:56:15 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

min7girl April 18 2011, 12:19:38 UTC

I keep rereading the last part and now I want all the confessions! Make me drabbles woman and make them now!

400 words each. Minkey,, ontae, and Jjong/girlfriend go!

I shall pester till I have them!

Hehehe!

***devilish laugh***

jinkibumiminho April 18 2011, 19:52:40 UTC

I think I could manage...but my dirty little secret is that I just don't see MinKey -- you haz youtube-age proof?

I have put carrots out for the plot bunnies. We'll see who shows up!

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