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Secret Mission

Jun 10, 2011 01:58

Title: Secret Mission
Author: Shattered Tenshi
Rating: G
Fandom: JE
Genre: General
Pairing: None; Nikaido Takashi, Senga Kento, then Fujigaya Taisuke on side
Warnings: None
Notes: Countdown for Taisuke's 24th birthday! Ficlet per day. 15 more days! 400 words. Same universe as Making New Friends. Major change in age differences.

( Takashi furrowed his eyebrows together as he stared at the figure on the couch. )

je: fujigaya taisuke, topic: je, je: nikaido takashi, !taisuke birthday project, je: senga kento, group: kis-my-ft2, ~fan-fic

Comments 11

elindar June 10 2011, 08:20:22 UTC

d'awwww, cute~ 8D paper things. i think their conversation is very believable. it's kinda hard to write from child's pov sometimes. at least i think so.
but yay, this universe in nice, looking forward to continuation~

shatteredtenshi June 13 2011, 07:37:11 UTC

Yea, there's a fine balance I think. I don't want to make them sound too babyish or too adult-like either. =| Good to know I'm doing alright.

I'll do my best!

mbdancer8o8 June 10 2011, 08:25:04 UTC

Yay! You continued this verse! :D
So adorable~~~
They sound about 4 or 5. :D

shatteredtenshi June 13 2011, 07:37:46 UTC

Ah, that's roughly about how I imagine them too, I think. That's good to know!

pgycjk June 10 2011, 13:25:13 UTC

argh.. they are too cute.
i love this :)

shatteredtenshi June 13 2011, 07:37:55 UTC

Thanks for commenting!

kananyan June 10 2011, 18:24:12 UTC

cutest universe ever!
*approves* =D

shatteredtenshi June 13 2011, 07:38:54 UTC

Thanks!

rin_aokuro June 10 2011, 20:12:57 UTC

aww~ <3 nisen!kids are something i just can't resist at all! they're making me giggle and smile like an idiot, and aww i want to see what they'll make for taipi's birthday! :D

(and btw about their ages; to me they sound pretty much the same as my little sister did when she was about four~five years old. :3)

shatteredtenshi June 13 2011, 07:40:18 UTC

They're definitely adorable. I want kids!NiSen for myself, lol.

Glad to know that! My sister is a bit too old now for reference and I don't quite remember that well when she was that age, haha.