Title: From Here On, Let's Believe
Author: Shattered Tenshi
Rating: PG
Fandom: JE
Genre: AU, Angst, Romance
Pairing: Kitayama Hiromitsu x Fujigaya Taisuke
Warnings: It's depressing. Character death (in terms of multiple lifetimes).
Notes: Written in second person POV.
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Perhaps, they were two people who never meant to be happy together, no matter how many lifetimes have passed. )
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omigod, that was soooo good! truly amazing
i cried at the end ;__;
and the 2nd per POV worked well too, the reader (or at least me) can easily tell who you were refering too..you described it very well...and your details were just right, it gave me some really good imagery :)
it's so bittersweet and lovely, i'm so totally mem-ing this :D
thanks for the great read~
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No problem figuring out who you were writing about. ^^ As long as you tell us which characters are in it, but maybe I could figure it out anyways. It's not my first time reading one of your fics after all. :P
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I was very close to not listing the pairing, but yea, decided to list them after all.
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♥♥♥ i like your fics.
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and i liked the second person. i use it in my own fics quite much as well, and i think i fitted well here.
i liked this, thank you for sharing~ :3
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this was good! i like the concept of it, and it is rather tricky to do a 2nd person POV, but i think you maneuvered it well. i could tell who your "you"s were referring to XD
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