From Here On, Let's Believe

Sep 27, 2010 23:02

Title: From Here On, Let's Believe
Author: Shattered Tenshi
Rating: PG
Fandom: JE
Genre: AU, Angst, Romance
Pairing: Kitayama Hiromitsu x Fujigaya Taisuke
Warnings: It's depressing. Character death (in terms of multiple lifetimes).
Notes: Written in second person POV.

Perhaps, they were two people who never meant to be happy together, no matter how many lifetimes have passed. )

topic: je, group: kis-my-ft2, ~fan-fic, pairing: kitafuji

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sandster101 September 28 2010, 04:22:37 UTC
*was waiting for this* xD

omigod, that was soooo good! truly amazing
i cried at the end ;__;
and the 2nd per POV worked well too, the reader (or at least me) can easily tell who you were refering too..you described it very well...and your details were just right, it gave me some really good imagery :)

it's so bittersweet and lovely, i'm so totally mem-ing this :D
thanks for the great read~

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shatteredtenshi October 1 2010, 15:23:10 UTC
Aww, thanks!

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sweetmilano90 September 28 2010, 05:38:51 UTC
I wonder why I decided to start my day with reading a death fic. XDD

No problem figuring out who you were writing about. ^^ As long as you tell us which characters are in it, but maybe I could figure it out anyways. It's not my first time reading one of your fics after all. :P

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shatteredtenshi October 1 2010, 15:24:40 UTC
Because we both can't resist angst =|

I was very close to not listing the pairing, but yea, decided to list them after all.

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shad_fg September 28 2010, 16:01:06 UTC
afgdkjhagdfhjagfhjaf omg awesome beyond words ;-;

♥♥♥ i like your fics.

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shatteredtenshi October 1 2010, 15:24:53 UTC
Thanks!

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elindar September 28 2010, 17:52:08 UTC
i really like the idea in this~ it was nice [tho kind of sad at the same time] to read further and see what would happen to them in the end. it was bittersweet and so sad in the end, but somehow i still liked the mood very much. maybe it's the season, i kinda like feeling melancholic during autumn. ^^;

and i liked the second person. i use it in my own fics quite much as well, and i think i fitted well here.
i liked this, thank you for sharing~ :3

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shatteredtenshi October 1 2010, 15:27:14 UTC
Autumn could very much be the reason why I finally felt like writing this. The second person thing wasn't the initial idea back when I first came up with it, but when I tried to write it for real, second person flowed a lot better. //nods//

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risakochan September 28 2010, 18:20:15 UTC
noo i half-screamt at the end ='(

this was good! i like the concept of it, and it is rather tricky to do a 2nd person POV, but i think you maneuvered it well. i could tell who your "you"s were referring to XD

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shatteredtenshi October 1 2010, 15:27:44 UTC
I guess I'm easy to read? Lol. Thanks!

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