FRANK. FRANK MAKES PANCAKES. FRANK EXPRESSES HIS SECRET LOVE THROUGH PANCAKES.
You are incredible. The whole time I was feeling so bad for Lyn-z and then GO FRANK GO, TELL HER and then PANCAKES and I couldn't stop smiling. I love them, and also this fic.
I'm sorry, I'm tired and coherent reviews are not my thing when I'm tired.
And it's okay, 'cause I'm a big sap too, both in general and for pancake-wielding Frank Iero.
ALSO: I've been doing this first request fic thing for xmexandxyoux and it might QUITE POSSIBLY be done today. Hopefully. SO, YAY, I ACTUALLY POST FIC EVERY FORTY YEARS OR SO. \o/
YAY. so basically all of what Jac up there said. and this made me feel better because i'm feeling irrationally shitty. but i'm listening to phoenix and i'm gonna type up what i've written of gerz!fic, so maybe i'll feel better. and make myself some frozen waffles. :] you rock. ♥
so this is mostly dialogue because I don't want to give it ALL away, and I've omitted parts, but not the parts i need you to see so you can help me. frank says two similar things; i need you to tell me if it works, if the fight scenes work without much buildup, or if it needs mucho work.
“Where the fuck have you been? You said you’d be home at ten.” “Frankie, I’m sorry, I was out with the guys. I had an anniversary today, you know that-“ ”I don’ see any guys. Looks to me like it’s just Quib or whatever the fuck his name is. You cheatin’ on me with him?” “No, we were just having a few-“ ”Don’t lie to me, bitch!" Frank slurred and slapped her across the face. Lindsey stalked off, following Frank’s lead.
~ Lindsey and Frank walked in silence from the bar, cast in darkness, except for the light of the moon. “I know you’re screwing him.” “Babe, I’m not, I promise you.” “Don’t lie to me, Lindsey!” The sickening sound of hand against cheek ....
and also I have a bit of a problem. the writing in the fic is *ggod*, but I feel like it's not *better*, you know? Like, I haven't used any similies or metaphors. Nowadays I have been mostly trying to avoid using AND too much. Idek have you ever had this problem? Any advice?
This is why you're my ficwifey. My savior! ♥_♥ This definitely helps! *showers you in gratitude and cobra starship songs* (I'm listening to Hot Mess right now. Guh, so gooood)
omfg, these are both gorgeous songs. I definitely see where they could turn into a story. Grapevine Fires looks like the best bet. I'll warn you, though, I'm no Empires expert. I hope I can do Tom or Sean justice as a character. and I'm ripping my hair out over I mean, working on that cupcake club au for cduclub, so this might take a while, but omg, I'm really excited already. ♥
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FRANK. FRANK MAKES PANCAKES. FRANK EXPRESSES HIS SECRET LOVE THROUGH PANCAKES.
You are incredible.
The whole time I was feeling so bad for Lyn-z and then GO FRANK GO, TELL HER and then PANCAKES and I couldn't stop smiling. I love them, and also this fic.
I'm sorry, I'm tired and coherent reviews are not my thing when I'm tired.
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I ENJOY INCOHERENCY.
ugh, you can tell how big of a sap I am.
pancakes are the way to a girl's heart, obviously!
thank you so, so much.
(: !
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And it's okay, 'cause I'm a big sap too, both in general and for pancake-wielding Frank Iero.
ALSO: I've been doing this first request fic thing for xmexandxyoux and it might QUITE POSSIBLY be done today. Hopefully. SO, YAY, I ACTUALLY POST FIC EVERY FORTY YEARS OR SO. \o/
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Question: what request are you talking about?
I don't remember...
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so basically all of what Jac up there said.
and this made me feel better because i'm feeling irrationally shitty.
but i'm listening to phoenix and i'm gonna type up what i've written of gerz!fic, so maybe i'll feel better. and make myself some frozen waffles.
:]
you rock.
♥
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yay for fic and waffles!
i'm glad you liked it.
thanks so much; you rock harder.
♥
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frank says two similar things; i need you to tell me if it works, if the fight scenes work without much buildup, or if it needs mucho work.
“Where the fuck have you been? You said you’d be home at ten.”
“Frankie, I’m sorry, I was out with the guys. I had an anniversary today, you know that-“
”I don’ see any guys. Looks to me like it’s just Quib or whatever the fuck his name is. You cheatin’ on me with him?”
“No, we were just having a few-“
”Don’t lie to me, bitch!" Frank slurred and slapped her across the face.
Lindsey stalked off, following Frank’s lead.
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Lindsey and Frank walked in silence from the bar, cast in darkness, except for the light of the moon.
“I know you’re screwing him.”
“Babe, I’m not, I promise you.”
“Don’t lie to me, Lindsey!” The sickening sound of hand against cheek ....
thank yoouuuu.
♥
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My savior!
♥_♥
This definitely helps!
*showers you in gratitude and cobra starship songs*
(I'm listening to Hot Mess right now. Guh, so gooood)
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nngh
love love love
okay bye.
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that is a lovely song. they're a great band, omg.
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