Ficlet: What Spring Does to Cherry Trees

Oct 10, 2011 11:31

Now that the closet is clean, it's back to business. Which is to say, here, have a mirror ficlet ( Read more... )

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weepingnaiad October 10 2011, 16:26:50 UTC
Oh, my! *fans self*

UNF. I love, love, love this! Pardon while I squee loudly.

First, I adore Winona's last name. Thank you! I've been casting around for one that I liked and that one works well.

Second, besides the whole scenario being incendiary, I mean, c'mon, bb!Pike bound and taking it from George... UNF, anyway, besides being so totally hot and hitting all my buttons, you threw in all the political machinations. Made George Kirk smart and ruthless -- 'burn the fucking Empire to the ground' -- and yet there's still more underneath them both.

Thank you for this, m'dear! It's brilliant! And, no, I wouldn't object if there were more in this particular 'verse even if it's years down the road... if you know what I mean!

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sharpestscalpel October 10 2011, 17:32:16 UTC
I am so glad you like it! There is always that worry, when writing for people's prompts.

Winona's last name is totally yeomanrand's name for her - I stole it with no remorse because I liked it so much. *grin*

Christopher is totally the young scion of the Pike family and, as such, is full of plotting and intrigue. The Kirks are newer in the grand scheme of Empire politics - upstarts in many ways, but promising with the right encouragement, the right control.

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secretsolitaire October 10 2011, 17:12:03 UTC
Mmmmmm, this is delicious.

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sharpestscalpel October 10 2011, 17:19:40 UTC
The best things come in blond, underage packages? That might be George's motto.

Thank you!

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rubynye October 10 2011, 18:21:20 UTC
OH BABY BABY YESSSSSSSSSSS.

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sharpestscalpel October 10 2011, 18:23:32 UTC
This is, of course, the same Pike who has Jim so well trained that Jim brings him McCoy as a get-well present. SO.

:D

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circ_bamboo October 10 2011, 19:16:24 UTC
OMG the last sentence. OMG.

*fans self to avert combustion*

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sharpestscalpel October 10 2011, 19:42:30 UTC
Christopher Pike is no innocent, y'all. *grin*

Glad you liked it!

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treksnoopy October 10 2011, 19:48:13 UTC
Damn, this is hot!
For a moment, there was something there in Christopher's grey eyes, something satisfied and ruthless - but then he blinked and it was gone.

I love the thought that Chris is actually plotting and using George.

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sharpestscalpel October 10 2011, 19:49:08 UTC
Tactical genius, bb. Tactical genius.

Thank you!

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