Comments | sharpeslass: Coming to Terms, Gojyo/Hakkai, NSFW

sharpeslass

Coming to Terms, Gojyo/Hakkai, NSFW

Jul 15, 2008 13:31

Title: Coming to Terms
Author: sharpeslass
Pairing: Gojyo/Hakkai
Rating: NC-17 (NSFW)
Disclaimer: don’t own, no money, this is just my sad excuse for a substitute sex life, etc. etc...
Summary: Gojyo needs to decide what he wants. First time, PWPish. Directly follows Nocturnal Admissions. But if you hate it, and liked the first part, then this part simply ( Read more... )

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Comments 69

lauand July 15 2008, 22:21:05 UTC

Yay! Don't worry, not the slightest similarity to X-Men third part.

I really, really loved Gojyo's voice and thoughts here, they felt real and were a great fun to read. I liked how you blended the hotness and the emotions in this, my favourite part the "gap" conversation and interaction, although I also loved the way Hakkai could read Gojyo's mind at some points.

Delightful reading, just like the previous part. Thanks for sharing!

sharpeslass July 15 2008, 23:02:14 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm still rather uncertain about this one. We'll see how it fares I suppose!

jessiedark July 15 2008, 22:56:17 UTC

That was amazing that was perfect that was astounding. Wow.

sharpeslass July 15 2008, 23:03:12 UTC

Thank you so very much!!! *weeps with relieved gratitude at the praise*

kansouame July 15 2008, 23:07:36 UTC

OMG.. I love you... that was amazing. The dialogue was superb and .... god that was hot.

I can't even review properly.. *goes to the corner to emit small fan girl sqeals*

sharpeslass July 15 2008, 23:11:09 UTC

I'm so happy you liked it. For some reason posting this one was giving me tummy aches of anxiety. Small fan girl squeals definitely make me feel much better! Thanks so much for reading it.

youkai_girl July 16 2008, 00:00:15 UTC

Yay, no relation to the third X-Men movie. ^_^

Very hot, very in character, and a joy to read. Looking forward to the next installment.

sharpeslass July 16 2008, 04:44:22 UTC

Thanks you so much!

Next? I'm not sure where to go from here. But I welcome plot bunnies of any kind. *hopeful stare*

xcerpted July 16 2008, 00:16:23 UTC

“Don’t let Goku do the shopping, okay, Sanzo?”

“Hakkai!” Gojyo shook him. “Talk sense! You’re fucking freaking me out here!”

I'd be freaked out too, lulz. I lo-o-oove the dialogue.^_^

sharpeslass July 16 2008, 04:46:11 UTC

Thanks! That was my favorite part actually. It kind of just showed up on the paper by itself, but it was about the only bit I really liked. I was terrified my beta would want it removed, but fortunately she liked it as well.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means so much to get feedback!