Comments | sharpeslass: Fic: Coming Clean, 585, NSFW

sharpeslass

Fic: Coming Clean, 585, NSFW

Nov 01, 2008 23:50

Title: Coming Clean
Author: sharpeslass
Rating: NC-17 (NSFW!)
Pairing: 585
Summary: PWP with a little Hakkai angst.
AN: This is completely plotless smut. Because I felt like it... and so did they. Thanks to the lovely and talented jedishampoo for her mad beta skillz and constant willingness to read a pairing that is not her own.

( Click here to read Coming Clean )

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Comments 67

koijewel November 2 2008, 07:36:00 UTC

Wonderful!!! And hot. *fans self*

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:21:43 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

ladylotusmoon November 2 2008, 08:49:47 UTC

Wheee! Angsty Hakkai is kinda amusing. I love the payback. *snicker*

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:22:39 UTC

Payback is fun. And I heart angsty Hakkai also... (I couldn't create a "serious" tone to save my life, I fear... but I will try, one of these days).

7veilsphaedra November 2 2008, 09:10:13 UTC

Lovely! So many good moments in this one. I loved Gojyo's explanation. It just made everything worthwhile.

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:24:25 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting! I started out with the Gojyo explanation in mind and then nearly forgot to include it. Sometimes one line leads to another without regard to my best laid plans. I'm glad it still fit in there without seeming too awkward.

louiselux November 2 2008, 09:48:23 UTC

That was great! So much fun, and hot too. And funny! I loved how you wrote Hakkai - he's so crazy and adorable.

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:25:29 UTC

Thank you so much. This is the first Hakkai POV I've posted and he is my very favorite, so I am very happy if I got him down believably!!

theskywasblue November 2 2008, 15:25:44 UTC

waaaaaahooooooo *dies happy*

I knew that would be so very, very worth reading. I loved every bit of it. And your Hakkai was just lovely - angsty, yet funny, and just a little bit crazy - just perfect IMHO.

*fans self and joyfully goes to read again*

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:26:53 UTC

*hugs you to bits* Thank you for reading and for critiquing my Hakkai, as requested... (and for liking him!!) If you bothered to read it twice, then you definitely made my day!!

theskywasblue November 2 2008, 20:29:55 UTC

Of course I did! I even saved it to my hard-drive so I can read it again and again...even if I'm away from the internet.

I wouldn't lie about such things.

sharpeslass November 2 2008, 20:40:49 UTC

Awesome! *huge hug*