I'm only a little over a screenfull in and I am already fucking DECIMATED. I hope you're happy, jerk!
Kneeling, he scrapes a bar of soap against a washcloth and sets to work scrubbing his brother's bony shoulders and back.
Oh my God, the punches just keep coming! I was totally picturing Dean's old physique up until this point.
He so desperately wants to please Sam, so eager to share in the moment that he sometimes pretends.
No! NOOOOO! My poor heart ;~;
Bobby tears his eyes away from Dean, takes the slip of paper from Sam and reads it. He looks up, not comprehending. "Son?"
This fic is so fucking good man. Everyone's so REAL. You're doing Bobby so well.
I would recommend warning for gore, by the way. The initial injury was REALLY gnarly in a way that 'Graphic Violence' didn't prepare me for. And that's kind of saying something, since I mostly read Hellfics... A fic hasn't made me feel that weak in the knees since I read jamiekay's Black Turn to RedTo clarify: It's great. But wow. I'm kind of impressed with my squeamish self
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Thank you so much for the feedback. I went and changed the master post here and on Hoodie Time to specifically warn for gore. I do have to ask, though...because from reading your comments, it doesn't look like you read part two. Did you read it? If you didn't...I want to caution you EXTRA HARD for gore in second part. If Dean's initial injury was on the edge for you, the second part will throw you hurtling into the abyss. No joke. Heh. So, just so you know...lots of gore in part two.
But thank you so much for all your encouraging words. I appreciate it very, very much!
Yes, you're right...this is a little bit outside my norm. Sam is the main focus...but at the same time, he's the main focus in the same way he was in, say, "Mystery Spot"...in that he's the focus, sure, but HIS focus is Dean. So you can see my Dean-girl stripes no matter what. ;)
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Kat
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Kneeling, he scrapes a bar of soap against a washcloth and sets to work scrubbing his brother's bony shoulders and back.
Oh my God, the punches just keep coming! I was totally picturing Dean's old physique up until this point.
He so desperately wants to please Sam, so eager to share in the moment that he sometimes pretends.
No! NOOOOO! My poor heart ;~;
Bobby tears his eyes away from Dean, takes the slip of paper from Sam and reads it. He looks up, not comprehending. "Son?"
This fic is so fucking good man. Everyone's so REAL. You're doing Bobby so well.
I would recommend warning for gore, by the way. The initial injury was REALLY gnarly in a way that 'Graphic Violence' didn't prepare me for. And that's kind of saying something, since I mostly read Hellfics... A fic hasn't made me feel that weak in the knees since I read jamiekay's Black Turn to RedTo clarify: It's great. But wow. I'm kind of impressed with my squeamish self ( ... )
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But thank you so much for all your encouraging words. I appreciate it very, very much!
Take care,
Kat
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Amazing and sad!Yay, a new brlliant work!
Hugs you.:))
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Thanks so much. :)
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This is so amazingly moving but it's different then your regular theme. Yes, there's Dean whumpage but you've concentrated on Sam.
Now to continue...
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Yes, you're right...this is a little bit outside my norm. Sam is the main focus...but at the same time, he's the main focus in the same way he was in, say, "Mystery Spot"...in that he's the focus, sure, but HIS focus is Dean. So you can see my Dean-girl stripes no matter what. ;)
Kat
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