j'adoube: Isolated Pawn (chapter 4)

[sharlot1926]

After zigzagging over three dirt roads, each one progressively more rustic and weather-beaten than the last, the Impala came to a crunchy stop at the end of a red dirt road as the first stars popped through the evening sky.

Comments

[amypond45]

I love the native american mythology! Such a relief to see Sam reconnecting with his brother -- he must've missed him something awful. Also thank you for portraying John with such complexity while still being the obsessive bastard we love to hate (and I don't hate him, he just comes across so unsympathetically so much of the time!)

[sharlot1926]

John is a challenge to write...that's for sure. He is so complex. He's a hero or a villain depending upon who writes him. For myself...he's a little bit of both, I think. He's a lot like the rest of us, in may ways...so flawed, but trying their best.

Thanks so much for the comment. :)

Kat

[lidia1991_an]

Loving,loving this story, you're a very talented writer! :)

[sharlot1926]

lidia, you never fail to put a huge smile on my face. Thank you so much for this. I'm so happy you like this one.

Kat

[jpgr]

You weave your stories so well and each one has a different basis. The only constant (aside from damn fine writing) is the Dean whump!

Another wonderful installment!

[sharlot1926]

Haha! I do like my whump...and I'm only just getting started with Dean in this story. ;) Oh come on...you knew it was coming. :P

/hugs

Kat

[taylorariel]

Once again I appreciate all the work that goes into each chapter. Glad that Dean/Will is being more reasonable to Sam. And Glad that John has gotten help. I look forward to what comes ahead. Thank You.

[sharlot1926]

You're so sweet, taylorariel. I agree with you. I really am glad that Dean/Will is bonding with Sam...and I'm so happy Sam is so present for him.

I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story. Thanks again! :)

Kat

[tifaching]

Love, love, love half asleep Dean connecting the smells of John's jacket with home and security. And Sam knowing his brother inside and out and letting Will know it. And, as always, much love for your John. Hard assed and mistake making but loving and doing his best.

And your outside characters. So brilliantly drawn.

On to the next chapter!

[sharlot1926]

Dean is definitely in there some where, isn't he?

Oh yeah...John is so...*snort*..."John". God love him, but dayamn...

Thanks so, so much. :)

Kat